Comments by All Members
- "You started off with a woe is me, metaphor and then you almost turned it into something beautiful but, you drove it into the ground with a wow, big surprise, everyone wants to live kind of thing. The language didn't intrigue. No one knows how to die. You can pick how you die but, know one knows how to die. Just because you hurt doesn't make you an authority or even entitled."
Posted by Phalanx on "Everyone in pain knows how to die..." by Storm
- ""[I would be better off dead
a corpse pale and red
with all these thoughts in my head
I would be better of dead.]" that was the best line of the entire poem, not that the entire was not great, it was fantastic but as i said that little line was the best,to me and it sparked so much imagination, wonderful piece"
Posted by Unknown on "Everyone in pain knows how to die..." by Storm
- "I really like this; I know what it's like to want someone who doesn't seem to know you exist. :/"
Posted by Unknown on "Writerblock I" by Storm
- "This is a prime example of the power of emotion. A few syllables per line still brought me this feeling of melancholy and despair. Great work."
Posted by harlequinn on "Closed Door" by Storm
- "I love the amputate my heart line, very good and very relatable."
Posted by Unknown on "Storm" by Storm
- "this just migt be how our blood feels when someone cuts their veins. pretty good."
Posted by Unknown on "Blood View" by Storm
- "reminds me of all these kids at my school who buy their identities at music and fishnet stores. Stupid people, Well written other than the little blip at the end of the fourth stanza."
Posted by Unknown on "Sociophobic" by Storm
- "I too forget, I sometimes notice the scars on my arm and shoulders and can't for my life imagine why they're there... I can't relate to who I was just three years ago. I don't know either wether forgetting is good or bad, it scares me. "
Posted by Storm on "Pain Excused" by Storm
- "Pain excused, great wording. Maybe you will forget like I did. I do not know if that is god or bad."
Posted by Blinded_Tiger on "Pain Excused" by Storm
- "Five years later joining DP I had forgot about it and was like. "What the fuck is al this cutting about! Why are they doing that?!". Was a funny moment when I realized I had been in the same boat."
Posted by Blinded_Tiger on "Pain Excused" by Storm
- "I actualy managed to forget that I ever cut myself. Even for the big and ugly scars on my arm(yes I cut deep). Now it only happened twise but I remember how I felt."
Posted by Blinded_Tiger on "Pain Excused" by Storm
- "i found myself rocking, beautiful and eerie at the same time, i swear i heard a music box playin along with i.t--b.eau.ti.ful ----~*dani*~"
Posted by GraveFlower on "Lullaby" by Storm
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