Comments by All Members
- "The sharp things that made you subjective...A piercing and poignant muse to be sure MV. The clarity of insight through pain perhaps; but it can be a viscous cycle. Cheers my friend! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Coincidentally" by midnights voice
- "Yes isn't it amazing how people go to a viewing and say he looks so good . We probably couldn't outrun a a fast flying bird-man . Thank you Wednesday . And Happy Birthday ."
Posted by midnights voice on "Coincidentally" by midnights voice
- ""you look good in cold" is my favorite line. It would be hot to see a bird man in real life I think while running with my head turned haha!"
Posted by Arwen on "Coincidentally" by midnights voice
- "Yes it is all very intriguing like the hammer found in solid rock that is 40 million years old ot the frozen forest recently uncovered from melting ice in Antarctica that is 200 million years old from which they were able to extract DNA from ."
Posted by midnights voice on "Coincidentally" by midnights voice
- ""and the stars are so cold" was a huge anchor for me on this piece. Great work. Also, the picture leaves me wondering about globalization and how ideas travel and did the idea of this bird deity (can't find the name of it) get there through travel or was there really a bird/human hybrid deity... leaves my head slightly spinning. "
Posted by Cassette on "Coincidentally" by midnights voice
- "Hey ! That sounds great . You may remember the "Pixies" with Bjork their lead singer . Pixie Dust does he many connotations ."
Posted by midnights voice on "Shiver" by midnights voice
- "Much truth MV. I've frequented a few C&W bars down in Homestead, Fla. over the years and back in the 20th century. Never got lucky though until I met my wife and asked her for a dance during last call :) Cheers my friend! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Shiver" by midnights voice
- ""You get a colored drink
in a crowded bar
where you are a nobody . . . " I love this line, mv"
Posted by Cassette on "Shiver" by midnights voice
- "I have seen married men flirt up a storm with their ring on. I was just as awkward as I could possibly be. I seem to be a different kind of nobody. I liked it though. No I've never been to a bar. "
Posted by Arwen on "Shiver" by midnights voice
- "Like the way you used an adjective for a noun in the last stanza MV. Gives new, multifarious meanings to titillate the imagination. Cheers my friend! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on " Reality" by midnights voice
- "I know 'black dog' is usually in reference to depression...but reading this, I realized this was not the case. Thanks for sharing."
Posted by natalie on "Black Dog" by midnights voice
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