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Reality
By midnights voice
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We walk the edge of separation
fall into despair
or elation
Don't tell me you know the difference
as you vaseline
the compliance
The week is full of weaks
(SIC)
Tweet after tweet
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Copyright 2018 midnights voice
Published on Thursday, January 11, 2018.
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On Friday, January 12, 2018, dwells
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wrote:
Like the way you used an adjective for a noun in the last stanza MV. Gives new, multifarious meanings to titillate the imagination. Cheers my friend! - Dan
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On Friday, January 12, 2018, midnights voice
(971) wrote:
Thank you Dan for reading and revealing comment .
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On Thursday, January 11, 2018, Arwen
(187) wrote:
I like the 1st lines. I don't understand what (SIC) means. I have thoughts about the other lines that I cannot even put into words. Tweet after tweet makes me think this is a political type of poem. Anyhow it is just a guess haha!
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On Thursday, January 11, 2018, midnights voice
(971) wrote:
It all depends on how it affects you Wednesday . Everyone has a doffered experience . Thank you for reading .
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On Thursday, January 11, 2018, Cassette
(1144) wrote:
You always pick the most lovely images to accompany your work. this is complex and vivid; great job.
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On Thursday, January 11, 2018, midnights voice
(971) wrote:
Thank you Cassette . The images help convey the meaning more than a thousand words . Sorry I had to say that !
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On Thursday, January 11, 2018, Jerry stiles
(251) wrote:
Nice write m.v.,,
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On Thursday, January 11, 2018, midnights voice
(971) wrote:
Thank you Jerry for reading .
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On Thursday, January 11, 2018, hazydaisy
(132) wrote:
This could be one of my favorites of yours. I love the tone- indifferent, unattached, clinical. The last stanza is especially interesting.
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On Thursday, January 11, 2018, midnights voice
(971) wrote:
Thank you hazydaisy for your exquisite commentary .
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