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  • "A civilized society is a true paradox. As this civilization is only obtained by expelling the ones who not obey to it's conformity, because they are seen as unfit but with so many fear for the wilderness they will surely make mistakes. Civilization it's only civilized to the members of it's community but the outcasts are ostracized and hunted down. Isn't that what the wolves do? The beast within is something society will perceive as demonic, because they are afraid of admitting they look alike."
    Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "Beware of the Dog" by Melancholic VIncent
  • "Everyman harbors that beast from eons past, imbedded in the genetic code, sometimes closer to the surface, sometimes deeper. A civilized society requires conformity, or else! Good one Vince!"
    Posted by dwells on "Beware of the Dog" by Melancholic VIncent
  • "We all have it. It's a personification of the aspects of ourselves that we perceive as animalistic, bizarre or just difficult for us to accept. It's a fracture of ourselves so we can deal with it at a comfortable distance. Although it's an illusion of perception. A cope-mechanism."
    Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "Beware of the Dog" by Melancholic VIncent
  • "be careful what you wish for cause you just might get it...right? and yes, i agree ...we all have a beast within. welcome to dp and thanks for sharing."
    Posted by natalie on "Beware of the Dog" by Melancholic VIncent
  • "Nice style going on here- as in the "Sometimes I feel ..." Great work. Like to get a sense of difference in the way people write their work sometimes. Cheers ;)"
    Posted by Symbol on "Loose Ends" by Melancholic VIncent
  • "I love this line Vincent, "Ends with an inarticulate cry Of despair and defeat" Thank you for the read, many images sprang into my head from your words. ;)"
    Posted by Symbol on "Unforgiven" by Melancholic VIncent
  • "Indeed melancholy tis this one. Sorry to hear, you never know but the future may brighten up for you. Don't give in to believing it won't because that could be what is preventing it. "
    Posted by Symbol on "Compulsory Confinement" by Melancholic VIncent
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