Comments by All Members
- "i like the feeling of the emptiness...
almost like a de-ja-voo in reverse.
verrryyy skilled
i would replace the word sorrows with "pain" or "hurt"
the word sorrow has reached a cliche status.
but still works in this poem.
i like this alot
check out mine?"
Posted by Unknown on "It lingers once more" by VampireMandy
- "Thank you hun I like to find the right image for a poem and I seam to be good at it because I get a lot of good feedback on the poems when I do. "
Posted by VampireMandy on "Kiss's" by VampireMandy
- "I really like the idea of using images alongside poems, and this poem is very well connected to this image, nicely done m'dear, write on. "
Posted by Unknown on "Kiss's" by VampireMandy
- "There's a great feeling of loss and being lost in this piece. How the angel doesn't have a purpose but is waiting for one. I like this very much, great piece, write on."
Posted by Unknown on "I am death with broken wings" by VampireMandy
- "I really like this dark, compelling, and it's about vampires which good because I just watched Dark Shadows yesterday lol Keep writing good as this!"
Posted by Unknown on "The Lady Of The Night" by VampireMandy
