Comments by All Members
- ""Yet only with pain I can cope; for this is my word of Hope"... this is a work of brilliance, with extremely intelligent wording...there are a few other parts I want to quote but won't, don't want to leave an unnecessarily long comment; three things of six/six things of three...the paradox of all and none...this is an amazing post, throughout. I will be coming back to read this again, very nice
-NN"
Posted by NarcissusNarcosis on "The Word of Hope" by The Black Lark
- "I quite enjoyed this. It holds its own well amongst my favourite poems of all time. Thank You for sharing."
Posted by Unknown on "Disclosure" by The Black Lark
- "That title is inspiring, wish i'd have thought of it. These lyrics are thought provoking, spurned from an event that shook the foundations of reality as you once knew it, like a hundred eyes staring in different directions which all turn and focus on one single realization. Hail."
Posted by Unknown on "The Distance In Me" by The Black Lark
- "beautiful.. Visions of mal intent, A case of great pain, a life well spent... touched me deeply.. great work."
Posted by dalphon on "Beauty" by The Black Lark
- "These losses are never forgotten.The memories never dull.The woe comes instantly,from out of nowhere and hits you in the face like a bazooka blast.You are left to pick your teeth out of the pavement and wonder if the tears will ever run dry. I feel for you."
Posted by Honey on "In Memoriam" by The Black Lark
- "Unusual and profound tribute. To be able to discern the deceit in a compliment perhaps, or commonplace phrase uttered with mal intent. Words of wisdom indeed, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "In Memoriam" by The Black Lark
- "As a Trial Member, you seem well on your way to advance in the ranks. This piece traveled well and brought an organized conclusion of well coordinated chaos. I look forward to more!"
Posted by redfurrydragon on "Disclosure" by The Black Lark
- ""Of virgin birth, lifelessness is born.
From dead air we rise.
From dead air we live.
From dead air, our deepest dream will be fulfilled."
Alarming Talent Rush. Adrenaline written out in impressive verese. Gifted you are. Rendered with such intricate splendor. Thank you
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Posted by Unknown on "Disclosure" by The Black Lark
- "Welcome and much enjoyed the dark philosophy presented with some liberal interpretations perhaps. Cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Disclosure" by The Black Lark
- "Well!!! Nice!! Very nicely put together.. I could guess your not new at writing?.. cool.. hello there and welcome to Darkpoetry. Roam around and read others as it will bring them to you as well.. if you need anything im a click away.. Don't be a stranger this is an AWESOME place.. =)"
Posted by Devilish on "Disclosure" by The Black Lark