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  • "That is so true. We can only see in others what we have in ourselves, otherwise we wouldn't be able to recognize it. Every one and everything is a projection of ourselves. Everyone is a mirror."
    Posted by Cantara on "Paragon Un-World " by DoctorAsh
  • "The period says it all. Hehe...the common herd as fish, a new take on cows. Mmm..."passing in and out of this phenomenal of reality"...indeed, that. Good work, honest and forthright."
    Posted by Unknown on "Paragon Un-World " by DoctorAsh
  • "There is such a need for solitariness here, in its seeing/finding of another course, detaching from the 'hook' of the multitude, which ironically seems to end up shredded and apart, usually...... is the need for escape, just like the need for completion not as universal and conforming? How could we escape from who we are without being ourselves? Such a conundrum existence is, how teasing, almost imposing on us the ways of an alternative being in its inevitability. But sometimes we may actually be going exactly where we should be and perhaps bleeding is the only way of division, of the 'breaking from'...I hope I have not digressed too much but I really enjoyed the direction this took my mind. Thank you, such a fine turning point.... this final punch was welcomed! "
    Posted by La Leah le on "Paragon Un-World " by DoctorAsh
  • "Wow...I have missed reading your concepts of thought through words...this, though short, packs the metaphorical punch of a heavyweight...ending is very strong."
    Posted by Ravenblade on "Paragon Un-World " by DoctorAsh
  • "All part of the same, and yet separate, well said with a strong finish! Perhaps school of fish, or not? THanks."
    Posted by dwells on "Paragon Un-World " by DoctorAsh
  • "A sharp reflection...introspection with a bite...I am accustomed. Reality resides within our perceptions. Always good to see a longtimer post. Thanks for the thought. "
    Posted by Unknown on "Paragon Un-World " by DoctorAsh
  • "Great piece! I especially love the lines "And in this moment, that is propped up by our mere awareness of life, by our ability to create this one moment, that extends throughout our entire lives". This is my kind of poem! Ciao, T/S "
    Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "We Harm Ourselves" by DoctorAsh
  • "Quite an inspired piece here. A substantial weight of thought and asymmetrical beauty. This is a cool drink on a hot day, a moment of clarity in the maelstrom that is our existence. I can really appreciate this work, thanks for sharing it. Measurable quality: 10+...+tpu+"
    Posted by TheProphetUntold on "We Harm Ourselves" by DoctorAsh
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