Comments by All Members
- "OMG. You hooked me at "bite into the soft skin where your neck meets your shoulder". That is what puts me over the top. Nice read. JD"
Posted by Just Dave on "sex" by danica mcdonald
- "Realizing that every shitty thing you've been through only made you stronger, is possibly one of the hardest yet most rewarding things a person can do. Be thankful for all that you have and the bad things or people you've put in your past to get you to this amazing place in life. It's tough but moving on is a wonderful thing "
Posted by Unknown on "Life" by danica mcdonald
- "It's not always about lust OR love. Sometimes it's both and it's hard to find that line in between where you can stand with one foot on each side and stay balanced without fear of loosing altogether. Sometimes, it's just easier to let go and hurt someone else so that you aren't the one getting hurt. "
Posted by Unknown on "water" by danica mcdonald
- "Hearing voices in my head is like having a person with a hammer banging in ur head. At time its right but we learn to ignore it. After sometimes they just disappear ..... it looks like they have gone forever.... but they are just waiting for getting back in..... dragging in old memories and facts and making it worse!"
Posted by Unknown on "voices" by danica mcdonald
- "A babe in the woods, Life has many turns and your path has just started.
I wish you all the strength, wisdom and most of all happiness. When the going get tough, Write!
Best
EC :)"
Posted by Electric-Chair on "Life" by danica mcdonald
- "The greatest event when loving someone is putting there love for you to the test... But sometimes the result hurts more than you expected... and yes... you will still, even though it's mad, love them even after they failed to pass... Great write- really spoke out to me."
Posted by Symbol on "water" by danica mcdonald
- "Reading the title, then the poem, then the title again is altogether nice. Actually, I want to use the word "hearty". Nice vent."
Posted by Octopus on "fuck you" by danica mcdonald
- "Two words- target practice...you will feel powerful as you become a sharp shooter. It is one small thing you can control in your life. Trust me- it takes me out of my black. Nice way to convey the emotion...well done"
Posted by Invisible Girl on "gray" by danica mcdonald
- "i gotta go with dwells on this...my take exactly. uum last line, did you mean, 'waiting to consume you when it gets the chance'?
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Posted by natalie on "silence" by danica mcdonald
- "Amazing job playing with the pistol...just don´t do it man, it´s not a good thing. "
Posted by Unknown on "gray" by danica mcdonald
- "play some games with the pistol... love it, awesome post! great job on the back-and-forth from darkness to white, happiness to being down again. well done!"
Posted by Unknown on "gray" by danica mcdonald
- "Maybe she'll come to appreciate you, or maybe not and move on. Decisions we all must make, and they come anew, each and every day, cheers DMD!"
Posted by dwells on "pain you caused" by danica mcdonald
- "Was inspired to write my own 'Fuck You' poem - felt great. Thanks for the inspiration! And never let assholes run over you, be strong and true to yourself & fuck 'em if they can't get it. - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "fuck you" by danica mcdonald
- "I agree with ophelia, fuck her. But fuckin' A, great post, love the emotion, followed by 'see you around bitch'. Awesome write"
Posted by Unknown on "pain you caused" by danica mcdonald
- "She wasn´t worthy of you sweety, plz don´t cut, maybe it´ll get better soon? Let her go to HELL. You´ll soon find someone better. Hugz. "
Posted by Unknown on "pain you caused" by danica mcdonald
- "on the other side of that if you hold your heart out for anyone to take there eventually becomes a permanent detachment from the feeling itself. i like this, been there. keep writing"
Posted by Nixx on "rejection" by danica mcdonald
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