gray

By danica mcdonald

most days i can blence between the white, not quite to the color,
and the gray, not quite the black,
for some reason today i have sliped to the dark gray
hinting on black, so what did i do?
i got online, and a friend helped me to the white,
but then i sliped for no reason,
and he pulled me up again,
then he hurt me,
now im in the black,
i couldnt care less about my shitty life,
or about my dad in there humping his girlfriend,
or the fact that my dog is over there humping my work clothes because they smell like cooked chicken,
all i want to do is make everyone leave,
so maybe i can play some games with my .22 pistol....

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Copyright 2012 danica mcdonald
Published on Saturday, June 23, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Invisible Girl On Saturday, June 23, 2012, Invisible Girl (134)By person wrote:

    Two words- target practice...you will feel powerful as you become a sharp shooter. It is one small thing you can control in your life. Trust me- it takes me out of my black. Nice way to convey the emotion...well done

  • A former member wrote: Amazing job playing with the pistol...just don´t do it man, it´s not a good thing.

  • A former member wrote: play some games with the pistol... love it, awesome post! great job on the back-and-forth from darkness to white, happiness to being down again. well done!

  • danica mcdonald On Saturday, June 23, 2012, danica mcdonald (9)By person wrote:

    thanks guys

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