Comments by All Members
- "Intrigued from the moment you mentioned the crossing of rivers Str8; seems like nothing much changes along the Tigris and Euphrates my friend! Love the malleable hidden meanings here - cheers! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "-Seated-" by sTr8-jAcKeT
- "Fantasy is fun, but maybe all this is a mythological fantasy to another reality? Idk, thanks for reading though, lol."
Posted by sTr8-jAcKeT on "-Seated-" by sTr8-jAcKeT
- "A mouse of madness or technological splendor...The thoughts may never properly render. As a machine myself I find I can understand what the mouse is divining to find. Soul or soulless it may never know, but it will never stop searching to understand what it may never know. Drift within the cybernetic antipathy of emotion...Perhaps one day it will cry --a sign of its devotion. I thoroughly enjoyed this write. I feel it is a journey that may never truly end. --Is this a result of programming or a search to find what is within?"
Posted by SolApathy on "-Madness The Mouse; Part 1, Shadows of a Gunslinger-" by sTr8-jAcKeT
- "Good morning sir & thank you. A member helped me out w/ a membership again. It feels great to be writing & posting again, been years. Thanks again for the kind words."
Posted by sTr8-jAcKeT on "-Seated-" by sTr8-jAcKeT
- "Very poetic and melodic, I enjoyed reading it through a couple of times. I am glad to see you somehow managed to get to post new poems! :) The fourth verse is my favourite, very skilful. I'm most certainly looking forward to reading more of your poetry. Keep it up, my friend! "
Posted by Samael Crowe on "-Seated-" by sTr8-jAcKeT
- "“To grip the fear, they hold so dear,
From a god that lives off gainsâ€. Such a powerful line. This is a very reflective piece. I too question if I live in a fantasy or if I am the fantasy myself. Brilliantly penned!"
Posted by IamZero on "-Seated-" by sTr8-jAcKeT
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