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- "you were mine for one last night
as we danced on your grave
to the sweet sound of nothing
and the smell of sadness.
I felt this should have been the last stanza, you`re current one could`ve remained unspoken, but that`s just one opinion.
Overall I loved this read, felt such primal yearning and sadness. Good work!"
Posted by whisperingwalls on "Unsaid" by darling93demon
- "wow, i love the necromantic feel to this,
im a huge fan of love after death.
this is very haunting and romantic.
truly one of your best!"
Posted by haunted on "Unsaid" by darling93demon
- "I have started a Mommy pitt where we meet and throw them in together.. Broken all over again met me there once ... You shud read her .. she is quite the writter.. I have a few thoughts bout mommy... but I left them in the dungeon that I tossed her in.... Nice write sweety..."
Posted by Devilish on "mother, mother..." by darling93demon
- "damn darling, this was very emotional of you, thanks for sharing. your ryhming scheme is fucking great. your style is
keeping me on the edge of my seat.
i always say tragic things bring out the
strongest, most real raw emotions out
of people. and you penned it very well!
awesome!"
Posted by haunted on "mother, mother..." by darling93demon
- "This is exactly how my brother is and how i imagine him....it kills me inside everyday...i understand what are portrying in this, i loved reading it as well. Beautiful work."
Posted by namelessmadi on "mother, mother..." by darling93demon
