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"Excellent piece! The meter mimics to the flow of the sea when I read it. Beautiful imagery throughout. Ciao, T/S "
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Checkmate and the Sea" by whisperingwalls

"Lovely and very intense poem."
Posted by Unknown on "Checkmate and the Sea" by whisperingwalls

"Thank you. By the way, I'm girl. :-)"
Posted by Unknown on "A Romance of Ravens;" by whisperingwalls

"I love your style."
Posted by Unknown on "A Romance of Ravens;" by whisperingwalls

"Glad you enjoyed this work, I love the beauty and elegance I was able to bring out of the dark. "
Posted by whisperingwalls on "A Romance of Ravens;" by whisperingwalls

"This is deliciously dark and gothic and just all around beautiful. Loved it!"
Posted by Unknown on "A Romance of Ravens;" by whisperingwalls

"I share your passion for our wise winged friends. Glad you enjoyed this piece! "
Posted by whisperingwalls on "A Romance of Ravens;" by whisperingwalls

"It is always a pleasure for me to read a beautiful and dark piece.. And ravens are one of the greatest creatures to open the mind and the spirit to an inviting place of desolation and peace.. I could see the ravens before my eyes.. Cool imagery! Thank you for sharing! :)"
Posted by Unknown on "A Romance of Ravens;" by whisperingwalls

"Thank you, your imput is always appreciated. I found humor in this because the first draft of this poem was written in a leather bound jounal x)."
Posted by whisperingwalls on "A Romance of Ravens;" by whisperingwalls

"like opening a long closed book of classic work, etched leather and time stained pages... the tone and feel more weighted with its language but no less graceful... well done"
Posted by NikesRain on "A Romance of Ravens;" by whisperingwalls

"Much appreciated! Corpses claustrophobic is one of my favorite lines as well.. And the second line was a reflection on materialism. "
Posted by whisperingwalls on "A Romance of Ravens;" by whisperingwalls

"Corpses Claustrophobic... I really love that, and also "clutching to their heirlooms" . Really cool piece. "
Posted by anaksunamun on "A Romance of Ravens;" by whisperingwalls

"The grave sounds so uninviting here, I don't wish to be a corpse for long, dust in the wind is my choice... Wonderfully dark and gothic, great stuff. "
Posted by Magdalena on "A Romance of Ravens;" by whisperingwalls

"Much appreciated. I wanted elegant darkness to define the piece. I enjoy pause and silence. "
Posted by whisperingwalls on "A Romance of Ravens;" by whisperingwalls

"Very darkly, yet softly lovely. I'm sorry but ravens will always remind me of Poe, so I read this in the same measure I would read something of his. That isn't a bad thing, unless you get all fussy about cliches and what not. I think this is really well written. You have a unique layout, or format or whatevs. Aside from the elegant wording, it was what i noticed most."
Posted by Lydia Jade on "A Romance of Ravens;" by whisperingwalls

"Taking one last walk with the dead. Micely done!"
Posted by exvso8m1 on "A Romance of Ravens;" by whisperingwalls

"The Waking Dead* I'm glad you enjoyed this piece. "
Posted by whisperingwalls on "A Romance of Ravens;" by whisperingwalls

"Marvelous. I'll confees to being reminded of the tv show on the line "the walking dead". The final two are wonderful though. "
Posted by Unknown on "A Romance of Ravens;" by whisperingwalls

"This is so elegant. reminds me so much of alice in wonderland. My favorite thing in the world "
Posted by Unknown on "Stain;" by whisperingwalls

"This is gorgeous, I want to live inside this poem."
Posted by Dreaming in Stanzas on "Checkmate and the Sea" by whisperingwalls

"I love this, Devilish sent it to me to today :) the words are very alluring and paint a romantic picture - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "Checkmate and the Sea" by whisperingwalls

"This a great, the imagery is fantastic. I think the part about the sailor binds the poem together as well as bringing in a bit of humanity. "
Posted by PoetessDarkly on "Checkmate and the Sea" by whisperingwalls

"Lmao so cool"
Posted by QuartzAl18 on "Stain;" by whisperingwalls

"I love this! Reminds me of Alice in Wonderland... which by the way is my favorite movie "
Posted by Unknown on "Stain;" by whisperingwalls

"I don't know Alice. Perhaps you can tell me why it is always tea time. I loved this. "
Posted by With love_Crow on "Stain;" by whisperingwalls

" Madness."
Posted by Amaryllis on "Stain;" by whisperingwalls

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