Comments by All Members
- "She is..... so much and more... beyond words.... maybe, well described in a rather occluded way, understated.... maybe, like negative theology... perhaps. *too* thanks for sharing, much enjoyed."
Posted by Unknown on "Her eyes" by Starshine
- "speak of the devil... or to.... She will never get me; I liked the bleak imagery, that last paragraph was very emotive, very dolorous, but the will, thy will shall not be broken :) the words at the end.... I like the no surrender of this despite the despair throughout... first line, *expects* cheers! thanks."
Posted by Unknown on "The Devil's jaws" by Starshine
- "I love the concept here, the imagery, in my opinion could display it more, perhaps... but the sentiment is heart wrenching, with a mature perspective that knows the depth of loss.... and expresses it with sincerity. *than*... *were*... thank you for sharing and welcome to the valley."
Posted by Unknown on "The graveyard within" by Starshine
- "nice title and unique vision, loved the imagery, a lot of similes.... but the repetition of the title line was potent, nice concept/turn of perspective. Welcome to the valley"
Posted by Unknown on "On both sides of the body" by Starshine
- "The ending of the poem really tied it together. Nice work"
Posted by Unknown on "You" by Starshine
