Comments by All Members
- "I've writte a piece quite similar to this. It's nice to see more people out there with like thoughts. =)
Very well written. Love the flow of emotion and the rhyme form you've chosen. Excellent. -Twisted"
Posted by Unknown on "where is god" by darkvamptress
- "Very reminiscent of somethis that happened to me not to long ago. It turned out pretty shitty, but I can tell you about that later. I know where you're coming from, this is a good piece."
Posted by Juggalotus on "i could die" by darkvamptress
- "Wow. I mean. Wow. I know I can write some really good poetry from time to time when I have a lot of emotion bottled up, and I've had a few poems published, but this is better than any of my stuff! Very well done!"
Posted by Unknown on "where is god" by darkvamptress
- "wow....such resentment.....other than the typos very good..i felt your anger and hatered.....soon you will turn to the Dark Side of the force lol..*ahem* sorry im such a nerd *sigh*"
Posted by Lord Kalgalath on " i hate you" by darkvamptress
- "I'm a one-man army,
waging war against myself.
i can fully relate to the who;e poem..i feel the same..but these two line were the closest to something i could not express until now..you have given me the words..."
Posted by Lord Kalgalath on "ring of despair" by darkvamptress
- "A simply superb write..excellent..and other good words...i agree with Frivolous about Christianity.....nice and i fully agree with all points of the poem.."
Posted by Lord Kalgalath on "where is god" by darkvamptress
- "Amazing....i've often found myself saying things close to this...Wonderful write brought with an entourage of sorrow. deliciously done. -Methos"
Posted by Methos on "take me" by darkvamptress
- "in my former post, I was not picking on all Wiccans, only the ones who are trying to be rebelious towards life, and acting foolishly about it. I have reserved respect for Wiccans out there, who know their shit, and use it."
Posted by Raze Drake on "where is god" by darkvamptress
- "No it isnt. Nothing is balanced in life, and I am sorry, but I hate when people say it is. You sound like a "mainsteam fluffy wiccan", who watches movies like The Craft, and Sabrina, the teenage witch. There never will be balance."
Posted by Raze Drake on "where is god" by darkvamptress
- "Im truly dazed by your work. You'll be seeing plenty of comments from me lol. Keep going, and know you inspire someone."
Posted by Drifter on "ring of despair" by darkvamptress
- "Beautiful. I was raised a christian, but found it nothing but a lot of hypocrites blindly holding onto a fading ideal that mankind is special. We kill everything we touch, like a plauge. I dont want to start now, if i did there would be more comments t"
Posted by Drifter on "where is god" by darkvamptress
- "even if you arent the person in the poem . you make me convinced of that .Do u have email.....on hotmail"
Posted by Unknown on "take me" by darkvamptress
- "hell, im just gonna make you a favorite. Love the write. Pure desperation, a feeling i know well. Good write."
Posted by Drifter on "take me" by darkvamptress
- "even my connection is too bad right here, and its the 33rd time i try to comment, but i just wanted to say GREATTTTTTT piece! and gentel prays, can i ask u a question! can i take u ? conside me an angel from the sky or a demon passing by hehhe well done!"
Posted by Unknown on "take me" by darkvamptress
- "remember, when life has hit it's lowest point that things can only get better an not worse, and the lows are worth the high's.."
Posted by Blood of Winter on "take me" by darkvamptress
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