i could die

By darkvamptress

if i could only get a sample of what it feel's
like to have you in my arms
i could die tomorrow.
and in the midts if my confusion you
tell me you in love
i could die today.
but this love my lost soul prays for
to be at your side forever although
tomorrow never comes.
if you could only answer my hearts question
and hurt me not inside
then with out a doubt
i could die right now..

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Copyright 2004 darkvamptress
Published on Saturday, April 17, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • The Crimson Queen On Sunday, March 6, 2005, The Crimson Queen (918)By person wrote:

    love is just something else in the world to fuck people up over.....nice write though

  • Juggalotus On Wednesday, May 19, 2004, Juggalotus (69)By person wrote:

    Very reminiscent of somethis that happened to me not to long ago. It turned out pretty shitty, but I can tell you about that later. I know where you're coming from, this is a good piece.

  • Mute Serenade On Thursday, April 22, 2004, Mute Serenade (445)By person wrote:

    I love the subtle progression. Quite marvelous. "tomorrow never comes". -Sue

  • Drifter On Sunday, April 18, 2004, Drifter (268)By person wrote:

    i know the feeling... too well actually. "D

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