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where is god
By darkvamptress
That's what I am thinking when I look outside
I only see evil, and no place to hide.
I can't help but wonder, what is going on
the world's gone to hell, and God is long gone
Its scary to realize that while I am thinking
our entire planet is rapidly sinking
further and further away from our dreams
and louder and louder grow billions of screams
Very soon the demons will have in their hands
the souls of all peoples, from all Earthly lands.
Humanity argues, the people all fuss,
and nobody sees that the demons are us.
Supposedly God's out there, or so I am told,
but I think he's dead, or at least weak and old.
So tell me the truth, look me straight in the eye.
I want you to tell me that God didn't die.
If God is a truth then why'd he go away?
If he really loves us, why didn't he stay?
Sometimes I wonder if I'm really odd,
because I am worried that we have no God.
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Copyright 2003 darkvamptress
Published on Wednesday, November 5, 2003.
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A former member wrote:
this is so great, its exactly my thoughts on the topic.
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A former member wrote:
I've writte a piece quite similar to this. It's nice to see more people out there with like thoughts. =)
Very well written. Love the flow of emotion and the rhyme form you've chosen. Excellent. -Twisted
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A former member wrote:
this was beautiful...
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A former member wrote:
Wow. I mean. Wow. I know I can write some really good poetry from time to time when I have a lot of emotion bottled up, and I've had a few poems published, but this is better than any of my stuff! Very well done!
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On Sunday, March 21, 2004, Lord Kalgalath
(182)
wrote:
A simply superb write..excellent..and other good words...i agree with Frivolous about Christianity.....nice and i fully agree with all points of the poem..
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On Thursday, November 6, 2003, Drifter
(268) wrote:
Beautiful. I was raised a christian, but found it nothing but a lot of hypocrites blindly holding onto a fading ideal that mankind is special. We kill everything we touch, like a plauge. I dont want to start now, if i did there would be more comments t
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On Thursday, November 6, 2003, Drifter
(268) wrote:
than work. BTW im a huge fan, you speak truth far more beautifully than I.
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On Wednesday, November 5, 2003, Blood of Winter
(296) wrote:
Maybe your looking in the wrong places, I find faith in the slow dieing woods that mankind rapes everyday...we destroy everything we touch don't blame them, blame us...good write though
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A former member wrote:
God and Satan are of the same powere... Everything in life has a perfect balance... It's just that evil is heard of more frequently than good... Yin and Yang... God and Satan ~ADRENAL~
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On Friday, December 5, 2003, Raze Drake
(85) wrote:
No it isnt. Nothing is balanced in life, and I am sorry, but I hate when people say it is. You sound like a "mainsteam fluffy wiccan", who watches movies like The Craft, and Sabrina, the teenage witch. There never will be balance.
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On Friday, December 5, 2003, Raze Drake
(85) wrote:
in my former post, I was not picking on all Wiccans, only the ones who are trying to be rebelious towards life, and acting foolishly about it. I have reserved respect for Wiccans out there, who know their shit, and use it.
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On Wednesday, November 5, 2003, Raze Drake
(85) wrote:
great poem, your use of emotion and thought was evenly spread upon this peice
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A former member wrote:
for my lack of knowledge that is
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A former member wrote:
Nice write, as for a reply to the other posts, I have to say i doubt there is either, there can't be one without the other, so im just agnostlically atheist.
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A former member wrote:
FUCKING GREAT SHIT RIGHT THERE
wow we really do share alot of the same beliefs
but yours in this poem were mine was i was younger
i didnt have any answers but i do now gods there hes just givin up
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On Wednesday, November 5, 2003, WinterGrave
(258) wrote:
im sorry to tell you, that if there is a god, he is weak...satan is stronger, look at all the hate and violence...if god is what people clame then there wouldent be so much pain and suffering.~~~Grave
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A former member wrote:
Satan truly is the greater power and not to say go for the winning side but he wants us to embrace all that was givin to us
gods more of a cock tease really gives us everything and either forbids it or takes it away
great write
kyle
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On Wednesday, November 5, 2003, Raze Drake
(85) wrote:
damn satanists, worshipping the devil, and....and smoking that crack shit.....:)
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