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i hate you
By darkvamptress
when you left me i tryed not to wish you bad but i did.
i tryed to say nice things to you but i couldn't.
biter and cold lonely nights grow old.
i get so much pleasure to say i hate you.
the person you are and all that your made of.
i hate you
as my tears fall and dry apon my face,
i wish you the worst simply because you bring
out the worst in me.
the word hate roll's off my tongue so easy
i look in the mirror and all i see is this
angry hateful person
that you made me
are you happy once again you've distroyed me?
I HATE YOU SO MUCH
IT'S LOVE!!
BY MISTRESS
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Copyright 2004 darkvamptress
Published on Monday, March 15, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on " i hate you"
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On Sunday, April 18, 2004, Drifter
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wrote:
You show a very raw way of laying out your emotions... nice work "D
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On Friday, April 9, 2004, WinterGrave
(258) wrote:
nicley done, the emotion is great.~~~Grave
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On Sunday, March 21, 2004, Lord Kalgalath
(182) wrote:
wow....such resentment.....other than the typos very good..i felt your anger and hatered.....soon you will turn to the Dark Side of the force lol..*ahem* sorry im such a nerd *sigh*
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On Monday, March 15, 2004, The Fallen Angel
(235) wrote:
quit a few grammar mistakes but i still can make it out i think+fallen one+
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