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take me
By darkvamptress
God, devil
angel, demon spirit
anyone who hears my cries
save me from this cold dark world
have mercy and pity
on me and my pathetic soul
Please look down or up
Please oh I beg,
take me from this world
I can't bare the pain
the loneliness
the depression
not being loved
the lack of someone there
someone, anyone
To love me and me to love
To care and they care back
Anyone, just one
Demon spirit, holy angel
race and fight
battle and war
As long as I get
to leave this cold. . .
dead evil, loveless world
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Copyright 2003 darkvamptress
Published on Wednesday, November 5, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Sunday, August 1, 2004, stormtalk
(727)
wrote:
Yeah, this world fucking sucks. Grow a spine and deal with it or go kill yourself.
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On Sunday, March 21, 2004, Lord Kalgalath
(182) wrote:
a prayer i have utter many a time myself....your work is awesome....you delight at every turn of the page...
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On Sunday, March 21, 2004, Lord Kalgalath
(182) wrote:
err *smacks the typo demon* uttered...
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On Friday, December 26, 2003, Methos
(121) wrote:
Amazing....i've often found myself saying things close to this...Wonderful write brought with an entourage of sorrow. deliciously done. -Methos
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A former member wrote:
even if you arent the person in the poem . you make me convinced of that .Do u have email.....on hotmail
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On Wednesday, November 5, 2003, Drifter
(265) wrote:
hell, im just gonna make you a favorite. Love the write. Pure desperation, a feeling i know well. Good write.
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A former member wrote:
even my connection is too bad right here, and its the 33rd time i try to comment, but i just wanted to say GREATTTTTTT piece! and gentel prays, can i ask u a question! can i take u ? conside me an angel from the sky or a demon passing by hehhe well done!
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On Wednesday, November 5, 2003, Blood of Winter
(296) wrote:
remember, when life has hit it's lowest point that things can only get better an not worse, and the lows are worth the high's..
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