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"strange & interesting - i really enjoyed this piece"
Posted by Riven Waker on "We Fought for Seville-Orange" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"short but sweet... envious of her... nicely done"
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "A Flower" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"hmmm I saw a blond woman folding her clothes lovingly...nude, of course.... I like the way the flower folds the clothes, perhaps.... and the color... the brightness of the blond...... leaves one as if shining upon the flower... when one opens by folding... the paradox of love.... what is there not to envy... to be at the hands of such an one. very nicely crafted *bows* "
Posted by Unknown on "A Flower" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"that's the beauty of poetry. It's not about "smart" or "not-so-smart"...it's completely subjective. And I like to be at least partially ambiguous as far as meaning goes. These words are about a feeling I had, fleetingly, today. The words convey that feeling, as best as I can describe it. It's fantastic that you can perceive of it in a different way. Like the way instrumental music effects a person. I appreciate your input, and value above all the fact that it made you think or feel something. Don't sell yourself short.."
Posted by Crush_With_Eyeliner on "A Flower" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"i get a totally different take on this... u're so totally in awe of her..like an angel; so u envy her clothes the way they hug every curve and corner of her body. awesome write!"
Posted by natalie on "A Flower" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"haha, ain't that the truth? people aren't always as they first seem. well done!"
Posted by natalie on "A Warning to My Younger Self" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"Crossing her legs...I'd never even thought of that. Fantastic."
Posted by Crush_With_Eyeliner on "A Flower" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"...or...a natural blonde...crossing her legs..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "A Flower" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"I got a fully different view on this than what seems to be the general consensus...makes me wonder if I totally misread it. But to me it was laced with sarcasm...one of those snarky "shhhhh...you're so pretty" things..lol. like, "I envy how you're so simple that even your clothes seem blonde". but I think I might like the alternate interpretation even better."
Posted by ebonyamore on "A Flower" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"okay, i guess i got it wrong, pictured a beautiful girl in her birthday suit ( i envy your clothes) with blonde hair...dont explain what it really is, i wasnt smart enough to get it the first time"
Posted by Unknown on "A Flower" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"I could tell you what it literally was about, if you'd like. I'd prefer to leave that all up to you. Birthday suit, huh? That's....interesting...."
Posted by Crush_With_Eyeliner on "A Flower" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"I saw a golden coloured bud...unfolding..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "A Flower" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"im not sure i get it either, for some reason im thinking birthday suit...ummm is that right? if that is it, what a striking visual."
Posted by Unknown on "A Flower" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"you have an amazing way of observing a moment. i like your mental construct. "
Posted by elisa on "A Flower" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"I'm not sure that i get it, I'm not very bright. But it sounds pretty. Sorry I don't have better feedback"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "A Flower" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"Writhing. You really brought this one to life. Excellent."
Posted by Unknown on "Rorschach Skin" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"great concept..i liked the feel to this."
Posted by Unknown on "Rorschach Skin" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"very cool... great idea... nicely done, write on"
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Rorschach Skin" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"brilliant, these snapshots work together so well. i love the fragmented feel of this work and such a heart wrenching end. wow. "
Posted by Unknown on "Summability" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"oh wow, this had such a large impact with so few word. its a bit saddening too. please post more "
Posted by Unknown on "Freudian Boxscore" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"Crushingly true. Sometimes the smallest thoughts hit the hardest. Welcome back to DP."
Posted by Scarrzz on "A Warning to My Younger Self" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"Smoldering imagery... This one has teeth."
Posted by Unknown on "Summability" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"inexplicably noted.........the cumulative ending of terrible insight... again, great stuff."
Posted by Unknown on "Summability" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"that void can be echoing death...disturbing yet wisely put...i also love the title :)"
Posted by DarkBlueClearWater on "Here We Dance With Ghosts" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"good warning. i'll definitely remember that...when in a subway platform"
Posted by RubyXero on "A Warning to My Younger Self" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"That stings with the burning truth that only a well examined life can wield. If we only knew these things then (which we know now ) "
Posted by Everlasting Gobstopper on "A Warning to My Younger Self" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"That's interesting to me actually. This is actually an older poem, and has gone through many permutations. I've settled on this arrangment, for now, but every time I look at it, I'm a little less sure. Is there another order you may suggest? "
Posted by Crush_With_Eyeliner on "Pictures Like Train Wrecks (2003)" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

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