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"Love the bouncing flow. It is hard.to find a good rhe flow that doesn't feel forced. Well done."
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Playing with The Grim Reaper." by ImmortalMistress

"Very beautifully written. I love the way your words describe every emotion."
Posted by lenores_death on "My Bloody Freak Show." by ImmortalMistress

"The inner-self is your best friend and worst enemy, great write. And I love the purple hair."
Posted by Alchemist on "The Mirror Of Truth" by ImmortalMistress

"Your rhyming patterns and descriptive arrangments are beautiful to say the least. Painting a wonderful picture of the "grey area" that so many don't see. thank you."
Posted by Iwas on "Silenced by light, awakened by night." by ImmortalMistress

"I like "cute and mysterious" so I am curious,would like to get to know you (I'm serious)Just going around meeting my fellow dark poets. Me,I'm 33,divorced,love music,singing, dancing,poetry.I'm currently incarcerated,I'll be home soon.I'm on Facebook,send me a friends request thru my e-mail jimmyanderson19@yahoo.com hope to hear back from you(if you are curious) Later, Poetic Warlock"
Posted by Poetic Warlock on "Silenced by light, awakened by night." by ImmortalMistress

"This is clearly an existential journey into the burgeoning subconscious of metaphysical weather patterns of a precipitous nature...mmm, one wonders by what means 'buried' becomes 'found'. The intricacy of potential discovery perhaps? Nice poem."
Posted by Unknown on "Silenced by light, awakened by night." by ImmortalMistress

"indeed. although i think this is not one of my best pieces of work. but i am always glad that you take the time to read my work. thank you. x"
Posted by ImmortalMistress on "Silenced by light, awakened by night." by ImmortalMistress

"very instructive...... I think this serves as a guide, perhaps..... to escape the binaries that threaten to split us all into fallacies of excluded middles and dichotomies of excluded possibilities... maybe even dilemmas with no horns worthy of holding.... thanks for sharing "
Posted by Unknown on "Silenced by light, awakened by night." by ImmortalMistress

"thank you for your comments. i am glad you liked it. its featured in my book that i am writing so im glad to get good feedback from you. :)"
Posted by ImmortalMistress on "Playing with The Grim Reaper." by ImmortalMistress

"aww thank you. i couldnt reply earlier as my profile wouldnt let me. but thank you for enjoying my poem and commenting :)"
Posted by ImmortalMistress on "Playing with The Grim Reaper." by ImmortalMistress

"Oh! What a work! At once dark and erotic. I can taste the dust on the floor. I can feel your desire and your despair. I am in awe."
Posted by Unknown on "Playing with The Grim Reaper." by ImmortalMistress

"Very powerful poem, your imagery is excellent, you have painted a picture with your words. Great work, not even sure if it needs a longer version as you mentioned on the page, as this poem says everything so succinctly. "
Posted by Unknown on "Playing with The Grim Reaper." by ImmortalMistress

"I liked this poem, I can relate to it, I think there' s an old Billy Joel song Honesty with the line, when I'm deep inside of me don't be too concerned, I won't ask for nothing while I'm gone. But your poem takes that kind of theme and expands beautifully on it. Well done!"
Posted by Unknown on "Escape In My Bubble" by ImmortalMistress

"thank you. this was one of these ones that the words just flowed. :)"
Posted by ImmortalMistress on "The Mirror Of Truth" by ImmortalMistress

"thankyou for your comment. :)"
Posted by ImmortalMistress on "The Break Up" by ImmortalMistress

"thank you for reading my poem and for the comment.:)"
Posted by ImmortalMistress on "Playing with The Grim Reaper." by ImmortalMistress

"really touched me.. u r a very strong personality and ur rhyme puts these tortured moments into perspective.write on"
Posted by natalie on "The Break Up" by ImmortalMistress

"cover that image and go with the inner feeling u know is the one that compelled u 2 write this. very good write. reminded fof someone... "
Posted by natalie on "The Mirror Of Truth" by ImmortalMistress

"You put your dream to paper well. Expanded and created a good piece. Much enjoyed. =)"
Posted by Unknown on "Playing with The Grim Reaper." by ImmortalMistress

"thank you very much for the nice comment.. :)"
Posted by ImmortalMistress on "Playing with The Grim Reaper." by ImmortalMistress

"thanks for the comment.... glad to know others can relate... :)"
Posted by ImmortalMistress on "Escape In My Bubble" by ImmortalMistress

"Dreams can be so inspiring. Great poem. "
Posted by beautifullybroken on "Playing with The Grim Reaper." by ImmortalMistress

"I couldn't have said it better myself. It's the evenings spent alone in my room, listening to music and watching the world outside my window that bring the most inspiration...nice to know I'm not the only one : )"
Posted by Unknown on "Escape In My Bubble" by ImmortalMistress

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