Silenced by light, awakened by night.
By ImmortalMistress
Cold
droplets of rain fall on the dusty marble floor,
Rust and endless
time have fused the hinges on the old iron door.
Decaying cracks
in the roof tease me with the world outside,
Locked away in my eternal
sanctuary, this is where i hide.
Cobwebs and spiders decorate
the corners of my tomb,
Just me and my shadow living in this lonely
damp room.
Through the cracks in the walls i watch people come
and people go,
I see all the seasons, from the spring sun to the winter
snow.
But watching and waiting is all i can do,
Time moves
much slower for me than it does for you.
Silenced by light,
Awakened by night.
We all end up here, the good and the bad,
We all move on from the life we once had.
But it isn't as
simple as being black and white,
There are things in both our worlds
that tend to bite.
But choose your path wisely as the light
is not always the good,
There is much to consider not just what you
want and what you should.
Even if you choose to lie buried in
the ground,
Make no mistake, you will be found.
Comments on "Silenced by light, awakened by night."
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On Saturday, April 30, 2011, Iwas
(39) wrote:
Your rhyming patterns and descriptive arrangments are beautiful to say the least. Painting a wonderful picture of the "grey area" that so many don't see. thank you.
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On Friday, April 22, 2011, Poetic Warlock
(7) wrote:
I like "cute and mysterious" so I am curious,would like to get to know you (I'm serious)Just going around meeting my fellow dark poets. Me,I'm 33,divorced,love music,singing, dancing,poetry.I'm currently incarcerated,I'll be home soon.I'm on Facebook,send me a friends request thru my e-mail jimmyanderson19@yahoo.com hope to hear back from you(if you are curious) Later, Poetic Warlock
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A former member wrote:
This is clearly an existential journey into the burgeoning subconscious of metaphysical weather patterns of a precipitous nature...mmm, one wonders by what means 'buried' becomes 'found'. The intricacy of potential discovery perhaps? Nice poem.
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A former member wrote:
very instructive...... I think this serves as a guide, perhaps..... to escape the binaries that threaten to split us all into fallacies of excluded middles and dichotomies of excluded possibilities... maybe even dilemmas with no horns worthy of holding.... thanks for sharing
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On Tuesday, March 15, 2011, ImmortalMistress
(29) wrote:
indeed. although i think this is not one of my best pieces of work. but i am always glad that you take the time to read my work. thank you. x