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The Break Up
By ImmortalMistress
Tell me the truth and I'll tell you no lies,
But don't
dare deceive me whilst looking straight in my eyes.
They see
everything, They are the windows to my soul,
They see right down to
my black heart that you once stole.
I was so ashamed to admit
what you had done to me,
But now I've opened my eyes and i am finally
free.
I was so convinced that you really cared,
I would
dream about things that we could have shared.
I blamed myself
for what went wrong,
But i see you for what you are, and it's made
me strong.
You cheated on me over and over, and constantly lied,
No matter what i said or done or how hard i tried.
But now
it's all over, It's finished, we are done,
Finally i can breathe again,
I'm back to being number one.
Nothing lasts forever, you were
just a means to an end,
So go find yourself some other girlfriend.
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Copyright 2010 ImmortalMistress
Published on Saturday, July 10, 2010.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
Comments on "The Break Up"
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A former member wrote:
wo this was so beautiful. i completely know where you are coming from. totally heartwrenching
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On Sunday, July 11, 2010, ImmortalMistress
(29)
wrote:
thank you for the comment. it's good to know that people like what they read. :)
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A former member wrote:
"I blamed myself for what went wrong,
But i see you for what you are, and it's made me strong." Saying I can relate to this would be an understatement...it's a horrible feeling...but still a breath of fresh air. Nicely done.
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On Sunday, July 11, 2010, ImmortalMistress
(29) wrote:
Thank you for the comment you left. It's good to finally get that piece down on paper.. means i can stop thinking about it. :)
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