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  • "hmmm I took the first to be French... a clear lusting... and a freedom to build on another's success... in the franchise, as if lust could be bottled. The enormity... yes, my enormity does value flesh ;) the heartfelt release was an odd juxtaposition, to me, against this (as I read it) euphemism for male potency; perhaps the birthmark is something genetic, like a monster who is made from the inside, inside an imagination, but inside the body of the monster, the enormity, maybe, lies the drive for the damnable... for the lust that creates the monster, possibly... and the red antlers, like a deer in the night... blazing red through the dreams of the monster, seeing lust and looking for release; what kind of heartfelt release is found in the defiling of virgin flesh... the damnable kind, the enormity of what it is to be monster. This is what I made of this, thanks man. all the best. "
    Posted by The Dybbuk on "Red antlers" by Dancing_Monkey
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