Comments by All Members
- "Ahhh! Another brilliant work of minimalism! I can relate to this on so many levels, I think we all can. Great job putting what we all are feeling into one, susinct sentence!"
Posted by mindsurfer on "Life" by orkeric
- "Often, less is more. This is a perfect example. You need not write a novel to effectively portray your feelings of angst over a love no more. Great work"
Posted by mindsurfer on "Aching Soul" by orkeric
- "Sounds like you found an excellent way to come to terms with a break up. This is one of the great things about poetry and writing in general. It allows us to look at our emotions in black and white, and sort of helps to put things in perspective, doesn't it? Very nice personal piece, well done.--Draven."
Posted by Unknown on "Yesterday's Days!" by orkeric
- "That's right - there is always retribution in the end. A really good write. I especially liked the ending very much."
Posted by Unknown on "My Puppet" by orkeric
- "Aww, this was sweet. I Like it. Love is a powerful thing. Hold on to what you have no matter what :D"
Posted by Unknown on "Keeps Me Going " by orkeric
- "for sure, agree with you here, edge of sanity, edge of insanity, i love paradox lol \m/, thanks for the thought"
Posted by Eye of Minerva on "Life" by orkeric
- "The infernal shadows shall arise from the depths to feast on the souls of the innocent, very sinister imagery at work here I loved the red glow of the moon, well done."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "The Dark" by orkeric
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