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"Yes it may be a tad late but it sure feels like it outside ."
Posted by midnights voice on "Evergreen." by TheProphetUntold

"Makes it all the more interesting, I'd have never known. "
Posted by CausticChlorine on "Evergreen." by TheProphetUntold

"Bruma translates to solstice in latin."
Posted by TheProphetUntold on "Evergreen." by TheProphetUntold

"I'm caught between figuring out if it's a reference to the Bruma from Skyrim or not. Either way, the first few stanzas contrasted with the single word descriptions following are lovely. "
Posted by CausticChlorine on "Evergreen." by TheProphetUntold

""Come, steal me the sun, and bury away its glow" I love the way this sets the rest of the poem up. Wonderful imagery throughout."
Posted by hazydaisy on "Evergreen." by TheProphetUntold

"Adam of Bremen's account of a blÃ³t celebrated at Uppsala. "Every ninth year there is a blÃ³t of nine days, a common feast for everyone in Sweden. Then they sacrifice nine males of each species, even men, and the bodies are hung from the branches of a grove near the temple. No one is exempt from this blÃ³t and everyone sends gifts to the shrine, even the kings. Those who are Christian have to pay a fee not to take part in the blÃ³t.""
Posted by TheProphetUntold on "Through the Hyrst of Midwinter Ghosts." by TheProphetUntold

"It seems a solemn ode to the souls of slaves ...the second to last stanza sealed that idea for me... Well wrought as is expected of a great mind. Thanks for sharing."
Posted by natalie on "Through the Hyrst of Midwinter Ghosts." by TheProphetUntold

"This invoked such a heaviness...looking back in that rear viewed mirror I ask,have I truly lived life yet?"
Posted by natalie on "Death Blooms." by TheProphetUntold

"Wake up. Kick ass! Repeat! "
Posted by natalie on "Dark Folk." by TheProphetUntold

"This sinks deep within to gnaw away at your heart,and soul with such anguish! Thanks for reminding me of the beauty of pain."
Posted by natalie on "A Thousand Suns." by TheProphetUntold

"Such a pretty, peace filled scene! Thanks for the stroll"
Posted by natalie on "Of Suns Below the Arch of Stone." by TheProphetUntold

" This put me into a similar meditative mindset that a walk in nature usually induces in me. Beautiful."
Posted by Anna McCarra on "The Dreamer, and the Deceiver. " by TheProphetUntold

"Candy apples and razor blades."
Posted by Honey on "The Procession of Flames." by TheProphetUntold

"I'll never grow tired of you dragging me,by a hand full of hair,through your world."
Posted by Honey on "The Procession of Flames." by TheProphetUntold

"Nicely written, the format gave the poem a dreamy feel."
Posted by Divine hell on "The Dreamer, and the Deceiver. " by TheProphetUntold

"Superlative ... a rare Halloween poem without a trace of corn... (except for the actual corn ) :D"
Posted by kinkifrog on "The Procession of Flames." by TheProphetUntold

"This has a lovecraft kind of feel to it. I enjoyed this immensely. Fantastic."
Posted by Kaiser Black on "The Procession of Flames." by TheProphetUntold

"That was badass writing sir,,great write,,keep them coming,,"
Posted by Jerry stiles on "The Procession of Flames." by TheProphetUntold

""Tis the season!" to shiver and shake... 10/10... ~worm~"
Posted by worm on "The Procession of Flames." by TheProphetUntold

"No headless horseman could hold a candle to this banshee TPU. A fleshed-out and frightful figure from our common subconscious; back when we lived in caves and cultivated the valleys perhaps. Here's you treat and cheers! - Dan - BOoo!"
Posted by dwells on "The Procession of Flames." by TheProphetUntold

"you give a Halloween poem the respect it deserves. I like it."
Posted by Patches on "The Procession of Flames." by TheProphetUntold

"I always enjoyed your words, this was no exception. I'm glad to see you're still around. "
Posted by Sin on "The Dreamer, and the Deceiver. " by TheProphetUntold

"I liked this one... it has a mysterious resonance to it... ~worm~"
Posted by worm on "The Dreamer, and the Deceiver. " by TheProphetUntold

"I enjoyed this. Had a mysterious feel to it, very well worded. Great write."
Posted by Kaiser Black on "The Dreamer, and the Deceiver. " by TheProphetUntold

"Great write,,sounds like an Indian talking to God,,"
Posted by Jerry stiles on "The Dreamer, and the Deceiver. " by TheProphetUntold

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