Comments by All Members
- "Feels like death....
As though you're no longer of this world but can see things unreachable in the distance.
Just caught in the stillness and eternity that is death."
Posted by natalie on "Sun Upon Me." by TheProphetUntold
- "Truly speaks to the cyclical inevitability of life and death: dour, yet beautiful, too. As always, I'm in awe of your words, glad to see you still frequenting these parts."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Silent as Soil." by TheProphetUntold
- "A quietly screaming ode. The second line in the first stanza and the first line in the final stanza are the burning pillars of this fire ass piece. ;) Your brutally beautiful style is always a ponder worth pondering. Classic TOC excellence."
Posted by Amaryllis on "Silent as Soil." by TheProphetUntold
- "Beautiful piece! But the closing stanza was my favourite! We all have that power to make things beautiful again..if only we were of Such a mind."
Posted by natalie on "The Wolf Shepherd." by TheProphetUntold
- "Peaceful reflection in the absence of... This is a very pondering and careful verse. I have circled back around many times to fully absorb this and you are at the top of your command in poetry as this paints so many different pictures in my mind. This is a collage in my eyes, so many variations to be explored in the dexterity of this. "
Posted by Amaryllis on "Malleus. Spiritus." by TheProphetUntold
- "Hauntingly beautiful, elegant and in tune. Your words paint images in my mind. I love poetry I can read and see at the same time."
Posted by River Lily on "Sun Upon Me." by TheProphetUntold
- "The imagery draws one into the dream and waking just the same. The grey words were also a nice addition to the mental scene. Nice work!"
Posted by Sudos on "Sun Upon Me." by TheProphetUntold
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