Comments by All Members
- "Thank you foster, it's been a while since I've last spoken to you, I hope all is wel on your end and hope to catch up with you soon. Take care till then =)"
Posted by Gray Vision on "Frustration" by Gray Vision
- "stirring sentiment...normerly, I'd steer clear of a sentiment like this; but you were so resolue and graceful; the 'stance' you adopt at the end. This poem was moving and your feelings were beautifully put into place; the subject matter was quite haunting, as we all took a bedside vigil.....like I say, not normerly for me, but your considerate and gentle tone was quite uplifting.....nice one :) "
Posted by stryder on "My Oath" by Gray Vision
- "Saw that you stopped by on one of my pieces in January... thank you. I enjoyed this read very much. Do stay with us."
Posted by Unknown on "My Oath" by Gray Vision
- "Beautifully written. I see it's been a couple months since you last posted something. You must bring more of your writes to the site. :) "
Posted by Unknown on "My Oath" by Gray Vision
- "I see you continue to write from your heart and soul. Love seeing that your still on here. I just don't get on much anymore. Be well my friend. :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Frustration" by Gray Vision
- "I liked everything about this write..everything was so peacefull..written with care and ease. What i liked most was your determination at the end..to protect you loved one at any cost.thanks for sharing:)"
Posted by Unknown on "My Oath" by Gray Vision
- "sanity on this crazy sphere is hard to find ..... you took me on this journey of "agony" ... you are a hell of an author .... i could feel the spread of "red" ... the warmth that soon turns chill ... Well done! ....thanks for the view!"
Posted by Opklot on "Agony" by Gray Vision
- "I know what you mean Ash, when you can read someone's work and relate to it in more ways than one. It truely makes the peice that much more stronger. Thank you and everyone else for commenting on this peice, have a great day all =)"
Posted by Gray Vision on "Agony" by Gray Vision
- "It's weird how one person's words can be used to describe so many different people's pain"
Posted by Unknown on "Agony" by Gray Vision
- "Hello Keltruth, don't think I've ever seen you round here, I'll have to drop by and definately see your works for myself. Take care tilll then =)"
Posted by Gray Vision on "My Oath" by Gray Vision
- "Hey SulaMoon thank you very much, I hope you're doing alright. We'll talk soon take care till then =)"
Posted by Gray Vision on "My Oath" by Gray Vision
- "It's the feeling that drives me to write most of my works, wether it be how I'm feeling or someone else. With this one I just wanted to capture the emotion frustration, which is why I wrote this one in the manner that I did. Thank you for commenting Lo, enjoy your birthday! =)"
Posted by Gray Vision on "Frustration" by Gray Vision
- "Ya Lo and this is something lots don't understand, the many routes hurt can lead an individual too. I hope you've never had to stray here even though it happens, but still I'd hope not. Thank you for dropping by though, I really appreciate it =)"
Posted by Gray Vision on "Shackled" by Gray Vision
- "Could definitely feel the weight of yours words in this, like the weight of the burdens they describe. I really dug the lines, "I've lost everything/ Even pain" I don't think people realize trauma can go beyond hurt into a whole new realm of emptiness. Lovely~"
Posted by Lolita on "Shackled" by Gray Vision
- "Felt as if you were saying this through gritted teeth, without skipping a beat. Certainly packed full of feeling. Lovely."
Posted by Lolita on "Frustration" by Gray Vision
- "Hey Opklot, thank you very much. I appreciate you taking to time to leave such a comment, take care and thanks again =)"
Posted by Gray Vision on "My Oath" by Gray Vision
- "this is a wonderfully written piece .... too often, humans do not take this vow .... well done! ....thanks for the view!"
Posted by Opklot on "My Oath" by Gray Vision
- "Thanks Natalie, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'll drop by and check out your works also. Take care till we speak again next =)"
Posted by Gray Vision on "My Oath" by Gray Vision
- "Hey wolfy thank you very much my friend, I'll definately keep treking. Just need to gather my thoughts, but I will again soon enough. Thank you for dropping by =)"
Posted by Gray Vision on "My Oath" by Gray Vision
- "Haha, oh how we love our new members here on DP, thank you for dropping by I'll definately continue writing as I'm sure will you. I'll drop by in give or take a day or two so you can post, anyways thank you for commenting on this piece =)"
Posted by Gray Vision on "Shackled" by Gray Vision
- "Ya I don't know how it came to this, I guess the inital thought behind this was that, his death was a sad one to begin with so this idea of love was developed to sort of mask the idea of the dead fellow? I don't know, just my imagination running wild lol, but anyways thank you for dropping by =)"
Posted by Gray Vision on "Valentine Day" by Gray Vision
- "And a powerful oath it is, she must be truly special for such an airtight vow. Very intimate, and protective piece, write on."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "My Oath" by Gray Vision
- "oh the hard core truth of valentines day, we celebrate a dead guy, and some how chocolate candies and sweet romance became of it ha -_-"
Posted by Unknown on "Valentine Day" by Gray Vision
- "sweet sentiment unfolds line after line in this awesome piece! she's lucky to have u. blessings."
Posted by natalie on "My Oath" by Gray Vision
- "Great emotive piece. Lyrical rhymes are awesome! I like you ass quote too ahahhaha :P"
Posted by Unknown on "Shackled" by Gray Vision
- "Thank you so much Eva for everything you've done thus far. Like I said before, I'm so greatful that I was able to meet you, along with everyone else. You take much delight in both my works and me as an individual and for that, I can't thank you enough. I guess you're right, "the good guys do finish last," but for me to meet individuals like yourself along the way makes it all worth it. Thanks again for dropping by and leaving such a heart warming comment, enjoy the rest of your day =)
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Posted by Gray Vision on "I Don't Know Anymore" by Gray Vision
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