Comments by All Members
- "i loved the rhythm and flow...read it out loud and it danced on my tongue...tho def very dark...loved it..."
Posted by scarletara on "Cry Angel" by Snowborn426
- "that's really deep. sounds like how i feel some days. it's a good poem to relate with."
Posted by Unknown on "Cry Angel" by Snowborn426
- "Beautiful. The last line not sure about, although I know what you mean but don't see it with this write. Still beautiful though. Reminds me of some of my writes.... "
Posted by Silent Meadow on "Beauty Of Lies" by Snowborn426
- "Thank you, i appreciate any feedback. Do you think it would be better to just get rid of the last line or change it to something else?"
Posted by Snowborn426 on "Cry Angel" by Snowborn426
- "It is as if you reached into my head and plucked a memory... I liked this one... Thank you for your poem."
Posted by Unknown on "Beauty Of Lies" by Snowborn426
- "I honestly really liked it until the very last line, it seems out of place, blackness dosen't sound right in this poem"
Posted by Deaths Apostle on "Cry Angel" by Snowborn426
