Cry Angel
By Snowborn426
Atop a hill
Of sin and pain
Was sent a boy
Without a name
For his delight
Upon the edge of night
He called for an angel
To save him from death
To the boy who cried angel
Save your frightened song
For those who hear you
Shall not
believe
No one will save you
You wear the sinners crown
Scream
your heart out
No angel will come down
Atop
a hill
He felt no guilt
For the lies
On which his life was
built
For his delight
Upon the edge of night
He called
for an angel
To save him from death
When the
clock struck
His darkest hour
The serpent shown it's face
As he began to drown
In his growing fear
He raised his arms
to the above so clear
Searching for the angel
But found a starless
sky
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Copyright 2009 Snowborn426
Published on Sunday, December 27, 2009.
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On Sunday, February 21, 2010, scarletara
(58) wrote:
i loved the rhythm and flow...read it out loud and it danced on my tongue...tho def very dark...loved it...
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A former member wrote:
that's really deep. sounds like how i feel some days. it's a good poem to relate with.
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On Monday, December 28, 2009, Dilated View
(582) wrote:
Sounds very frustrating. An unheard plea. Nicely done.
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On Sunday, December 27, 2009, Silent Meadow
(9) wrote:
I do relate to this.... My heart thanks you.This is a fav.
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On Sunday, December 27, 2009, Winter Born
(169) wrote:
cutting it would work. apostle has a point though, the last line throws off the rhythm.
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On Sunday, December 27, 2009, Deaths Apostle
(65) wrote:
I honestly really liked it until the very last line, it seems out of place, blackness dosen't sound right in this poem
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On Sunday, December 27, 2009, Snowborn426
(1) wrote:
Thank you, i appreciate any feedback. Do you think it would be better to just get rid of the last line or change it to something else?