Comments by All Members
- "loved this. my fav line was' an existence where words like "living" are synonymous with "pain""
Posted by natalie on "Awaken" by Dilated View
- "beautifully done.. simply put with a packed density waiting to be opened and explored... "
Posted by NikesRain on "Clarity" by Dilated View
- ""Time slips through fingers
Like the crumbs without the treat
And so I nibble without tasting
The design of my defeat"
Love this. I like your play on words. The cleverness makes this a joy to read."
Posted by cloudydaze on "Free Fall" by Dilated View
- "i found this beautiful, a cascade of thoughts and internal disclosures, while it seems so clear and logical there are undertones of whys and hows, the inexplicables.... which leads to the curiosity for this hopeful vision...."
Posted by Unknown on "Free Fall" by Dilated View
- "I am impressed by your ability to change style and how you make it flow no matter what direction you choose to take. This was something beautiful. Thank You. =)"
Posted by Unknown on "Free Fall" by Dilated View
- "I am so impressed with your writing as of late; you seem to have taken your talent to another level Ryan.......thank you for sharing your...clarity. ~b"
Posted by blue on "Clarity" by Dilated View
- "the lines "Or just leave me here, complacent / In a place that knows no dawn" really resonated with me somehow - i like the way this piece builds tension and then winds down sort of sadly - brilliant and beautiful
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Posted by Riven Waker on "Free Fall" by Dilated View
- "hope is so delicate; so wanting....your words illuminate that need for hope, and the sometimes tragic self.inflicting act of hoping.........daring..and fitting."
Posted by Unknown on "Free Fall" by Dilated View
- "Wow...just wow...there are so many keenly felt lines in here for me...It's like you've just spoken my own thoughts out loud ...how'd you do that ? energised but terrified...you're bookmarked x"
Posted by kinkifrog on "Free Fall" by Dilated View
- "This was an amazing piece Ryan... I think that most of us can identify with your plight. Well written man, thank you for sharing this."
Posted by Unknown on "Free Fall" by Dilated View
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