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"This is absolutely heartbreaking, I'm tearing up from all of this sadness. I know how you feel, I lost my mom when I was 4, and everyone thought I was too young to understand death. It was so overwhelming, I couldn't cry, I just felt empty. I blamed my dad for her death too, cause he didn't take her to the hospital, she had to drive herself. This poem hit so close to home, I love it, one of my favorites!"
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "On mothers dying." by Rachel

"Read this like three times and liked it more on each occasion...especially the fifth stanza, really relate to that..."
Posted by firsthand_account on "Broken Bottles" by Rachel

"Hey Rachel, its whort_diddy, I just wanted to let you know that I am back:) I was reading some of the old stuff I wrote, lol, good times, anyways, hope you are well, talk to you later, whort_diddy"
Posted by Unknown on "The problem with the dead." by Rachel

"this paints a rather bleak picture - nicely executed through skilled verse"
Posted by Riven Waker on "The problem with the dead." by Rachel

""Why is it that the more permanent something is the more excruciating it becomes?" For sure. This took the wind out of me and left me wondering how I will deal with my issues when my parental unit's times come. "
Posted by Dilated View on "on time and mothers and lies" by Rachel

"This...rips the heart out,tosses it up into the air...a skeet shoot.Crushing.Totally."
Posted by Honey on "On mothers dying." by Rachel

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