Comments by All Members
- "this has given me an idea for a piece of my own... thanks; would be interesting with music-- definitely something worth pursuing!"
Posted by Cassette on "Broken Angel" by Deaths Apostle
- "Every time I click that random poem button my mind is blown. I think this piece is awesome because you matched the structure with the prose so well. It feels like I'm reading a play of sorts, but in a really good way. Interesting, intense, not too long or short. Very cool."
Posted by Unknown on "The Beating Of A Broken Heart" by Deaths Apostle
- "aww such a romantic soul... the passion shows in your words. thanks for sharing."
Posted by natalie on "Hope" by Deaths Apostle
- "I like this one a lot...
gives the reader a great image, they can really imagine it. And put it into place. It has a lot of emotion, flow and feeling in it. Very well written. Many people can relate so its even better. So yeah Awesome job kuppykake:)"
Posted by Unknown on "Silent Asylum" by Deaths Apostle
- "This poem is okay....
I know how you feel, many people have to go through that type of feeling. I would like to have seen more imagery, use some metaphores and remember to always think third person point of view when writting :)
I like it though."
Posted by Unknown on "Doubt" by Deaths Apostle
- "I love this, its extreamly short... but it still gives the reader the emotions, the pain and suffereing and shows that no matter what, there is always tomorrow :) Very well written "
Posted by Unknown on "Life (courtesy of Hell)" by Deaths Apostle
- "it makes death out to be what it trully is, a beautiful tragic thing. within those moments, it is when you find what was significant to you. this is so beautiful. congradulations."
Posted by terris crimson on "Last Farewell" by Deaths Apostle
- "thats probably is going to happen i just hope i can be around to see it when it does if not at less i have a idea of what may happen ^_^ "
Posted by Unknown on "Apocalypse " by Deaths Apostle
- "I live with this kind of regret on a moment to moment basis.Watch this ship sink like cement in the ocean of life.It is there...in front of you...you chose to accept...ignore.We are here,now...continue on your path...just...never forget me...because I take you...there...with me...to death.Thank you. :)"
Posted by Honey on "Last Farewell" by Deaths Apostle
- "This one really makes me think of one of my family members. I must say this work was like the screeching of fingernails on a chalkboard."
Posted by nightshade on "Silent Asylum" by Deaths Apostle
- "I can see that this was something that not only was hard to decide but something you are still fighting with while you wrote it. I must say you dipped your pen in blood and this is your scarlet letter. Nice write"
Posted by nightshade on "My Dearest Love" by Deaths Apostle
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