Comments by All Members
- "I love the imagery and personification used here... however, I would edit the line that reads in part "...the death of a thousand dying stars". This sounds redundant. Otherwise, the poem seems to flow pretty well."
Posted by bluegypsea on "Dying Stars and Broken Universes" by LovelyUndead
- "The truth can be a brutal thing and you've managed to portray it very passively. The feeling here you've captured strikes home and I'm certain I am not the only one feeling that way. Great work."
Posted by Sudos on "I've Got A Secret" by LovelyUndead
- "I really enjoy this subject matter. To think of how little we matter in terms of the universe is overwhelming in some ways but to think of how complex we are on a molecular level is fascinating also. Wonderful writing."
Posted by DarkSkies on "Dying Stars and Broken Universes" by LovelyUndead
- "I could make a song out of this. The cosmic view almost godly that you present here is amazing. Somehow your every word is descriptive and delicate."
Posted by Nimue44 on "Geometric Cataclysm" by LovelyUndead
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