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"This one's a keeper and a firm favourite. Wonderful and loaded in its compact form."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Fornication Under the Consent of the King" by Clementine

"And yet it works so so well. I really enjoyed this."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Kennels and Gestures vs. Covalent bonds" by Clementine

"This is fantastic. I hope you finish this one day."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Pitchforks and Torches (a wiery bull-pen)" by Clementine

"oh i love this. "
Posted by spikedwithLUST on "Fornication Under the Consent of the King" by Clementine

"4 is particularly strong. "
Posted by spikedwithLUST on "A collection of shorts (thats not a title)" by Clementine

"I come back to this every so often. There's so much in the larger body and the haiku is profound enough to stand alone. "
Posted by spikedwithLUST on "Junkyard Robin (part 2)" by Clementine

"this feels like an undiscovered gem. "
Posted by spikedwithLUST on "Miriam A. White (A Silent Curfew Port)" by Clementine

"Its everywhere, and no where...but starbucks"
Posted by Miztaken4beauty on "Junkyard Sarah" by Clementine

"I love haibuns. Congrats for using such a wonderful form. Great work!"
Posted by Unknown on "Junkyard Robin (part 2)" by Clementine

"wow. . .. sensualism and provocative beyond wildest measure. originally scored and scratched and metered. .. egads."
Posted by Unknown on "The Unicorns and Barflies are Alive and Miles Away" by Clementine

"xxx. swimming in pools or red jello."
Posted by slow.burn.star on "Like Listening to Latex" by Clementine

"beautiful images swearm in my head upon reading this...simply excellent write:)"
Posted by italianbella on "Mr. Branches a Bluesman" by Clementine

"hmm quite amusing really...has a drunken feel then suddenly the scene pans out to a starbucks joint...the idiosyncratic today in contrast with the old western...cool write"
Posted by Rebel_not_Radical on "Junkyard Sarah" by Clementine

"mind numbing yet effective... continue on with drowning children, it suits the piece."
Posted by Bella Butchery on "Pitchforks and Torches (a wiery bull-pen)" by Clementine

""There is a ticking in my head which sounds a lot like children bathed in wasps"...such a great begining."
Posted by dying angel on "Pitchforks and Torches (a wiery bull-pen)" by Clementine

"it does feel incomplete..but it has substance..and it's going great so far. i'm sure when it's finished it will be even more breath taking than it is now."
Posted by dying angel on "Pitchforks and Torches (a wiery bull-pen)" by Clementine

"i actually enjoyed the habberdashery of this; this menagrie of images and emotions on which to examine through your eyes. . .. its like little vignets of experience and snapshots of life. . "
Posted by Unknown on "Pitchforks and Torches (a wiery bull-pen)" by Clementine

"or not...?"
Posted by Bella Butchery on "Like Listening to Latex" by Clementine

"like the almost subversive, subliminal capitalization of "Thing"; what could this 'thing' be?? hmmmm for unlawful carnal knowledge and such... g[r]asping write and so picturesque/burlesque"
Posted by Unknown on "Fornication Under the Consent of the King" by Clementine

"nice structure, i think it contrasts nicely with your disjointed images, and i can almost hear you whispering "THE BRANCHESSS""
Posted by stormtalk on "Mr. Branches a Bluesman" by Clementine

"killer title... and strange content, as always, hurry up and finish it so i can read it in full"
Posted by stormtalk on "Like Listening to Latex" by Clementine

"yeah, ditto monkey... please."
Posted by Bella Butchery on "Like Listening to Latex" by Clementine

"Hurry up dude"
Posted by Dancing_Monkey on "Like Listening to Latex" by Clementine

"always drowned in beautiful imagery so that i'm not sure if i'm missing something but what i leave with is good enough for me. thanks."
Posted by Jonas on "Mr. Branches a Bluesman" by Clementine

"My my. What a strange ride/write. Most pretty in a weird way. Like exquisite girls with shaved heads. I absolutely love love it. Thank you for this!"
Posted by nur hidayah on "Mr. Branches a Bluesman" by Clementine

"spine shattering. excellent."
Posted by Bella Butchery on "Mr. Branches a Bluesman" by Clementine

"well what a crazy title and poem -I'm not quite sure what kind of trip youre on, but i know i like it -esp. the line 'four coats of fists and a bottle of gin' -offbeat, surreal (a hint of satire??) -v.cool indeed"
Posted by Unknown on "Mr. Branches a Bluesman" by Clementine

"mother fucking bad ass, seriously"
Posted by Bella Butchery on "The Unicorns and Barflies are Alive and Miles Away" by Clementine

"screams good lyrics, i dog your lingo, will have to read more of you"
Posted by Bella Butchery on "May This be a Test to Tarantula Tones and Fevers" by Clementine

"so very, very true! this was set up well, though I couldn't get the "you lose 21 grams when you die and no one know where it goes" from that movie..haha, but it works"
Posted by hate_doll on "May This be a Test to Tarantula Tones and Fevers" by Clementine

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