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- "(my original comment got lost, damn, so this one will be much more vague; sorry). Quite clever & witty. Very well realised, constructed, slammed; nicely done. I found it a bit more deeply personal than "funny" yet it was still a "fun" read. All of us have our notebooks, many of us are kept by 'em... And nothing wrong w/ your grammar or spelling! Ink on..."
Posted by jonLyndon on "I Raped My Notebook" by technicolour-girl
- "i know this feeling too well but im a sucker for punishement and i know i didnt get rid of the photos or recordings. although i moved on, i never quite healed..."
Posted by Nixx on "Control, Alt, Delete" by technicolour-girl
- "i could only think of one guy in my life while reading this and a few things may be different but the feelings were almost the same. i still cant get him out of my thoughts sometimes though. thank you for sharing this :)"
Posted by Nixx on "TV Dinners" by technicolour-girl
- "A very funny piece overall. When I first read the beginning I thought it would be like that all the way through. But than it became very honest and I felt like it had more of a point to it.
Don't feel so bad, you will get better at writing with a little practice.
Very good personification :D"
Posted by Blood Saga on "I Raped My Notebook" by technicolour-girl
- "I can't remember reading you before...but you've grabbed my attention now. You have a gift that I could be quite jealous of. On another note.....oh my, I would never have been able to have a roomy during college. :::shivers at the thought:::"
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "A Bedtime Snack" by technicolour-girl
- "It's the worst. Sometimes, it takes some additional anti-malware software... or even a thorough disk wipe. If only that kind of immense pain were as easy to forget as all that."
Posted by Unknown on "Control, Alt, Delete" by technicolour-girl
- "Interesting how suiting the "catchy effect of a song" was for this piece. They get stuck in your head and at for some time you could not want to hear any song but that one. But eventually it wears off after too many repeats. But I always find myself rediscovering old favorites, months or years later, as happened in this piece. Sorry, random but it just came to mind, and I thought it was a great piece. "
Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on "Control, Alt, Delete" by technicolour-girl
- "Heh... I hear you. I wish it was as easy to ruin a man as it is to be ruined by one. God damn double standards. In any case, I know how you feel. Well, giving girls a try is not a bad idea. It's what I'm doing right now (and luckily that's quite easy where I am-- a women's college)."
Posted by CorruptedLittleGirl on "Dear God, Make Me a Lesbian " by technicolour-girl
- ""I need you to be who I fell in love with." I've felt this before. Just remember, time heals all. I know that sounds like a ridiculous cliche, but it's pretty true, in my experience."
Posted by CorruptedLittleGirl on "TV Dinners" by technicolour-girl
- "well done, i've been where you are and it f-ing sucks! i was more the microwave pop corn type though...great post. welcome to dp!!"
Posted by Unknown on "TV Dinners" by technicolour-girl
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