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- ""I once tried dependency, but that didn’t turn out well for me." ..... I like the overall feel of this... I don't quite understand the question marks on the first line of each stanza, as they aren't questions... The all caps answers killed it a bit for me too. "
Posted by Cassette on "Complications" by Audrey_Star
- "but time can sometimes make the relationship stronger ive been away from mine for six months yet we still talk everyday as if nothing ever changed"
Posted by Unknown on "Complications" by Audrey_Star
- "Very good work =]
I like how it was wrote so we can incorporate a part of us into it(those of us that bear these same weights and virtues)"
Posted by Deviated09 on "Anita Halfpenny" by Audrey_Star
- "i loved the way you opened this, the flow was awesome. the rest was good too, i just really liked that part "
Posted by Morbid_insanity on "Empty" by Audrey_Star
- "Hm. Something about this seems oddly peculiar. Two people divorced falling for other people? That's what I get from it. It's nice..."
Posted by Unknown on "Dialogue" by Audrey_Star
- "I find it funny when people say they find meaning in things like this, since obviously the only person that could find meaning in such meaningless space is you, if it has a meaning at all. Which I highly doubt it does."
Posted by Six-Out on "Two Doors Down" by Audrey_Star
- "This had a very sad feel to it that I think, in some aspect, we can all relate to a portion of ourselves. Very well done:) ~Ship!"
Posted by Unknown on "Anita Halfpenny" by Audrey_Star
- "Escape the pain in any form; as the soldier returning, each and all shall battle pain; and who am I to condemn one that seek less then life, one that seek nothing? Who am I to define life pain and love, and each one to the other? "
Posted by Blinded_Tiger on "empathy" by Audrey_Star
- "i keep finding myself reading your work...its pretty interesting...i must say i find myself drawn to it. well done."
Posted by Twilight on "Play" by Audrey_Star
- "this was sweet. like alullaby of enchantment and relaity at the same time. loved the second verse. well worded."
Posted by Twilight on "Grey Skies" by Audrey_Star
- "I agree with walks.. so raw. made me go all arggh arggh.. and scratch my claws on the wall .. good one. love the ending line"
Posted by Dancing_Monkey on "Empty" by Audrey_Star
- "aaaaah to sanctify even death!!!! truly this is a beautiful poem with truth pervading it with messages, little moralities...Much enjoyed"
Posted by Solace on "Immortality" by Audrey_Star
- "'fight
and fuck' powerful in it's simplicity, and so true as lust & love need the balance of yen & yang like night & day."
Posted by Unknown on "Forbidden Fruit" by Audrey_Star
- "Thank you for that, I love it when that happends. And yes the place where blue tigers run free, and monkeys dance is the place to be. But hey dont listen to the ones allready there ;)"
Posted by Blinded_Tiger on "Wonder" by Audrey_Star
- "I feel kind of hit by this poem. I may be such a man you describe, but I may also not be. You just killed the poem I was going to write. You simply handed me the reason I would have to write it, for free. "
Posted by Blinded_Tiger on "Wonder" by Audrey_Star
- "wisdom in these words. "I worship this life and all it holds;
For everyday new things unfold." never stop believing this... it is the glimmer which I dwell on. :::OLd "
Posted by OLd SouL on "Immortality" by Audrey_Star
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