Immortality

By Audrey_Star

As my time and memory fades from mind
a piece of me I hope to find.

My words, my spirit; I hope to weave
from this fluid I believe.

I worship this life and all it holds;
For everyday new things unfold.

Even death is that to sanctify
if I live I know I’ll die.

It will arise in a gentle tide.
It is something we cannot hide.

But upon this earth before you part;
Share your mind, your soul, your heart.

Our fear of death is our only vice.
Our life to death we sacrifice.

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Copyright 2003 Audrey_Star
Published on Wednesday, December 10, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Solace On Tuesday, March 16, 2004, Solace (1065)By person wrote:

    aaaaah to sanctify even death!!!! truly this is a beautiful poem with truth pervading it with messages, little moralities...Much enjoyed

  • OLd SouL On Wednesday, December 10, 2003, OLd SouL (717)By person wrote:

    wisdom in these words. "I worship this life and all it holds; For everyday new things unfold." never stop believing this... it is the glimmer which I dwell on. :::OLd

  • Dancing_Monkey On Wednesday, December 10, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1228)By person wrote:

    Damn.. this was realy great.. :o) woot

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