One last thing

By Audrey_Star

First sight.

Coiled perfection.

Timed reality.

Missed opportunity.

Entangled affections.

Obtuse love.

Constructive criticism.

Last chance.

Last kiss.

Last sight.

Last night.

Last breath . . .




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Copyright 2003 Audrey_Star
Published on Wednesday, December 10, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Mute Serenade On Monday, May 17, 2004, Mute Serenade (389)By person wrote:

    that is the spiral... incredible. Sue

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