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- "this poem really gives a lot to chew
on...I have never thought of it...
a conversation with my cervix!
(lol)
way to write!
"
Posted by Ears2hearyou on "Cervix" by PaYaSiN
- "I never even thought about it that way. That does make it more interesting xD. Good insight."
Posted by PaYaSiN on "Cervix" by PaYaSiN
- ":]
I do try haha. Thats my favorite line, the fuck like you part at least. I swear that popped into my head one day and all I did was think it until I came home to write. "
Posted by PaYaSiN on "Arithmancy" by PaYaSiN
- "'i want to fuck like you, rip her heart out, sewn into her somebody too' that line.. wow. i like this piece =)"
Posted by mysterylove on "Arithmancy" by PaYaSiN
- ""I also do not want to kill every woman". This is worrysome, the "every" in that sentence, as well as the poem above. That says to me, "I do not want to kill every woman (but there are a few that I do)." "
Posted by Unknown on "I'm Tired Of Shit-For-Brains Sluts" by PaYaSiN
- "Oh ok. Sorry if I misinterpreted, and I know anyone can be a slut, and my titles don't always reflect the piece, and in this case it was just a thought in my head that became the title. I also do not want to kill every woman, so idk if that is why you said its rash and worrysome, but its not really that extreme. ;]"
Posted by PaYaSiN on "I'm Tired Of Shit-For-Brains Sluts" by PaYaSiN
- "The former. I was not making fun of you, but I don't know if what you wrote about would qualify the woman as a "slut". Members of all genders (of all sexual orientations) are guilty of doing this, but I do realize that this is your point of view. I just think it's a bit rash and worrysome."
Posted by Unknown on "I'm Tired Of Shit-For-Brains Sluts" by PaYaSiN
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