Comments by All Members
- "The messege in this is so potent and clear, and like Ruby said, not too dramatic. I love the feel of this, it's almost turbulent. Great write, Phoenix, please keep it up. -Trigger"
Posted by Trigger on "Fake." by Phoenix
- "wow. that was nicely told. and i liked the transition...from writing something with words...to cutting it with blades and effecting your heart. great ending too. this was a really well written piece...you got the point across without being excessively dramatic about it. nice job"
Posted by RubyXero on "Fake." by Phoenix
- "Just a note to the original author "ashrain" http://www.darkpoetry.com/dp/1854/85912. I wrote this because of an ex, she says she wrote this 6 months ago, but seeing how long ago you wrote it, clearly it is your own work, it is beautiful by the way, if only it were for me."
Posted by Phoenix on "Fake." by Phoenix
- "Interesting... I like the way this captures the psychology of the unrequited lover... I wonder how many folks have followed the logic here. I take the delete/erase as indicative of what the rapist below suggests, that writing through it may help the voice here contend with the loss. I usually think of it as my past that I will not delete because it is a part of me that I will not surrender to the one who has hurt me. I guess for me its a matter of strength and pride... I will not sacrifice any of myself (my past) for someone who would revel in my loss. Rather, for me, it's a matter of conquering the loss by welcoming the opportunity that comes with it, the opportunity to love again, to love differently, to find anew myself in someone else. But that's me... a fun read... I wonder if there aren't more writing tropes you could bleed into here..."
Posted by Unknown on "Delete." by Phoenix
- "I enjoyed the simplicity and the cleverness. I think everyone chooses to look past the fine print, we never realize that what seems too good to be true really is."
Posted by wilted on "Contract" by Phoenix
- "that is what often makes the best poetry.just get the ball rolling and go with it :) I like this piece... the last line is haunting me. "
Posted by Unknown on "Contract" by Phoenix
- "I agree weith the rapist. This was strangely captivating. I like the concept. Keep it up. -Trigger"
Posted by Trigger on "Contract" by Phoenix
- "welcome to the dark... this was very enlightening and shweet. I need a phoenix now that you mention it ;)"
Posted by Unknown on "Phoenix" by Phoenix
- "Don't erase, I wan't to keep reading what you create... -Geisha"
Posted by Niemand on "Delete." by Phoenix
- "not what i was expecting but so true. every relationship we have makes us who we are. kinda hard to delete that. just remember the pains others cause us should be cherished, as pain, is the most direct way to grow. without pain there could be no happiness. "
Posted by denver nitze on "Delete." by Phoenix
- "Hehehehe....awesome dude. Nice. Love how you use the delete....you know what I mean..Good job."
Posted by Unknown on "Delete." by Phoenix
- "This is really good. I love the irony of it all, and I am sorry for whatever inspired it. Great write though, I'm fav-ing it"
Posted by Trigger on "Delete." by Phoenix
