Fake.

By Phoenix

i wanted to write you something today
with stolen words
and feelings from another
with an exaggeration
of my emotion
and how my heart sighs
when it hears your name

but i didnt want to be think
i didnt want to be true
i didnt want to sound like
all the fake sonnets
that remind me
of how i felt

i wanted to write you something today
something copied,
plagiarized
with big rounded letters
something i couldn't create
to express how you make me feel
when the truth is uncovered

but i didnt want to seem like i cared
i didnt want to be honest
i didnt want to be like
the other pirates
who use the words of others
to express their would-be-feelings

i wanted to write you something today
on your skin
with simple slits
in blood
with bruise marks
to cover where i broke your heart
because sometimes i do that

but i didnt want to use to my own words
i didnt want to repeat myself
i didnt want you to think i cared
i didn't think about it too much
so i decided to be simple
and say it like this...

.....Fake

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© 2008 Phoenix
Published on Wednesday, February 27, 2008.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Nixx On Wednesday, August 13, 2008, Nixx (235)By person wrote:

    i like this better than some of the repedative bullshit i hear sometimes. thank you. this was good.

  • A former member wrote: I can't think of a single thing to say except FAVORITE!

  • Niemand On Monday, March 3, 2008, Niemand (355)By person wrote:

    *breaks*

  • Trigger On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, Trigger (68)By person wrote:

    The messege in this is so potent and clear, and like Ruby said, not too dramatic. I love the feel of this, it's almost turbulent. Great write, Phoenix, please keep it up. -Trigger

  • RubyXero On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, RubyXero (481)By person wrote:

    wow. that was nicely told. and i liked the transition...from writing something with words...to cutting it with blades and effecting your heart. great ending too. this was a really well written piece...you got the point across without being excessively dramatic about it. nice job

  • Phoenix On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, Phoenix (8)By person wrote:

    Just a note to the original author "ashrain" http://www.darkpoetry.com/dp/1854/85912. I wrote this because of an ex, she says she wrote this 6 months ago, but seeing how long ago you wrote it, clearly it is your own work, it is beautiful by the way, if only it were for me.

  • A former member wrote: this was originally fake.. wonderful

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