Comments by All Members
- "Frickin awesome! Really great write. I love the idea, the way you work it... you flow. Nice job, much enjoyed! =)"
Posted by Unknown on "The Hunter's Hymn" by Syringe
- ""of living for breathing
of suffering through breeding" These lines made me pause to ponder. The last lines wrapped this up nicely. This was food for thought, enjoyed."
Posted by Dilated View on "The Hunter's Hymn" by Syringe
- "That's very smart of you because this is actually a warning of the ugly side of New York': all that glitters truly is not gold."
Posted by Syringe on "Blindside" by Syringe
- "you know, I just love the subway there is nothing more kinetic or more freeing then new york vibrant and alive even on the subway. Not that I have ever been but when I dream of the Big Apple this poem is what my dreams sound like. "
Posted by Everlasting Gobstopper on "Blindside" by Syringe
- "well written, but no matter how beautifully descriptive your words, i would still never go there willingly"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Blindside" by Syringe
- "The city so nice,they named it twice.It's so alive...just always so much going on,no matter where you are or the time of day.The place never does sleep.You've captured it well."
Posted by Honey on "Blindside" by Syringe
- "it seems like you know this kingdom well - your highly charged language really carried me there - makes me jealous for not being one of its denizens"
Posted by Riven Waker on "Blindside" by Syringe
- "Interesting word combinations and usages.A thoughtful piece of work. My mind drifts in this direction on many occasions...birthing tension indeed. :) Snake"
Posted by snakeskingrin on "Daylight" by Syringe
- "Better days ahead, it's a nice change to read of a demised relationship that has certainty in an ending, about something that was once dear to us, a trait I find so hard to aquire. "
Posted by Unknown on "XO" by Syringe
- "This is really good! I really like the flow you took with it. Great write!"
Posted by insideout on "XO" by Syringe
- "thank you for the comment, but honestly this poem was not intended as a dedication to the band itself. I love the band..their skills kill...but I wanted to make a piece about twisted dolls and the band name suit the tone perfectly...everything just kind of fell into place"
Posted by Syringe on "Dresden Dolls" by Syringe
- "you know I'm surprised you didn't get more comments on this...I love the dresden dolls...this is a very unique dedication indeed. It's hard to write a poem about a band like that and pull it off alright. nice."
Posted by Distorted_Reality on "Dresden Dolls" by Syringe
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