Comments by All Members
- "Awww, such an evil but sexy little thing you've got here. That's right! Good thinking when you CRUSHED the happy little fucker... Nice write.-Airi"
Posted by Niemand on "As you sleep" by Lawless Fighter
- "flawless rhyme... this poem reminds me of thoughts of my own poetry, some kind of trippy prophecy, poets and preachers combined... this would make a great song! L"
Posted by swing_the_hammer on "The End" by Lawless Fighter
- "Loving the rhyme scheme and wonderful rhythm. One could almost imagine a bard strumming and chanting..."
Posted by Sketso on "The End" by Lawless Fighter
- "Geez... that was good. Really really good, and very true. Amazing rhyme and nice flow. "The priest, his grace, perused his mind // In search to find a long lost line." stupendous. Bravo..."
Posted by Fantecstasy on "The End" by Lawless Fighter
- "Nice flow, although it bobbled in places (I probably read it wrong), and interesting theme... the futility of conflict often still provides a moral."
Posted by Sketso on "The Journey" by Lawless Fighter
- "And thus was born society... and God wept. Interesting choice of topics, but nicely done just the same."
Posted by Sketso on "The Party" by Lawless Fighter
- "I love the rhyme.This made me think of The Door's song of the same title.....ride the king's highway,baby. "
Posted by Unknown on "The End" by Lawless Fighter
- "Lovely. The meter is fluid, consistent. Your words took me into another world beautifully. " In death, they finally found peace." - knock-out ending. I love your work thus far. Welcome to DP :)"
Posted by Kaleidoscope_Heart on "The Journey" by Lawless Fighter
