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- "Nice train of thought. like the description, but the ending was a kinda weak. It didn't even really seem as if it did end. Idk I have a weird perception...I'm sure others will think the ending to be just fine...all in all...nice job."
Posted by Distorted_Reality on "tragic elitism ['08]" by chrome arctic
- "Indeed, this was curiously worded, and much enjoyed, but I think I missed the point. Never the less, if it works for you, then that is all that matters. ~b"
Posted by blue on "Karen Likes 3: A.M. ['07]" by chrome arctic
- "thanks
the stops and breaks in the wording is something i enjoy experimenting with.
as for the random quality, there certainly is that, but part of that is taking a personal experience of myself, turning it a bit transparent, and placing it over a time and place where the wording is common. "dystopian Lingo" as i like to call it.
like a human being living inside a metal box.
just experimenting really. i just found that writing straight forward was boring for me, sounded like a diary, so why would i expect it to be a rewarding read for someone else?
plus there's other elements such as design / photography and until only recently, experiments with sound which both fit ( i hope ), along with the poetry. a bit of a 3 front approach.
i think i just made no sense."
Posted by chrome arctic on "bleeding in february" by chrome arctic
- "Thanks, I try to keep things mildly vague.
the strung together eloquence of words is nowhere where i can be individual, leaving me to bolted together metaphors *s*"
Posted by chrome arctic on "to nowhere around" by chrome arctic
- "I don't know if this is what you do but it's what I do and I remember the things you say as they relate to me. Random thoughts aligned on one idea simply to evoke the emotion that was felt at the time. Random thoughts that have nothing on face value to do with the subject. Random thoughts that have everything to do with the state of the author. Random thoughts that shouldn't be analyzed but felt in the way they were organized, in the stops, in the choppy natural state of human thought. Random thoughts. That's what you remind me of. Sometimes, what people say to me is more profound than fifty two hours of editing one word to be perfect. Nice dude. Liked it. That's why I favorited you. You remind me of me.......:D smiley."
Posted by Unknown on "bleeding in february" by chrome arctic
- "Dearlings dearlings dearlings. He don't want a connection. He just wants a lack of oxygen and a void to go crawl into sometimes when the stupidity of existence gets too shitty that hovering in mid-air and time is desirable. I prefer sleep. I like you dude. P.s. when I guess what people meant I'm usually always wrong."
Posted by Unknown on "light from a dead star" by chrome arctic
- "Nice dude. Nice nice nice. She wanted to fuck me but I'd rather stand here and demean her with my mind. (Not what you said what you illicit in me, ah hell likely not the right word) Anywho. Good job guy."
Posted by Unknown on "deviant" by chrome arctic
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