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- "What can I rant about next.. "And thus without terror, darkness - prestige,
Answered the Jester, "My sire, my liege,
How certain this is death! Darkness entombed,
By the song of the winter, and the light of its moon," That whole 3rd stanza was just brilliant. The imagery you always somehow work into your perfectly strung together words is always fantastic. Not to mention you touch on all the images I love, the winter, the moon, darkness and flame. The classic dark beauties of imagery brought back to life in your writing consistently and I love it. The fact that after this long I'm the first comment(s) on this piece blows my mind. Sometimes I wonder if other people around here even read, and if they do, do they appreciate that this is more than just poetry, this is literary art. Something not appreciated enough by the common DP user. *steals your hat and tips it* write the hell on my friend."
Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on "The Circus - Act IV" by Fantecstasy
- "And now to set my constructive, in depth criticism aside :P This was phenomenal. As much a thrill as words can bring to me. Your ever famous alternating rhyme scheme and meter both presented with perfect flow and just.. the most such a perfect inconsistency its become almost consistent :P I give it 5 minutes before I'm reading this again. Then likely repeat that step an hour or two. Your circus is honestly one of the best series on this site in my books. Right up there with Purr_verse's tryptich series and everything i aspire to match in literary skill. You're a master of your craft."
Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on "The Circus - Act IV" by Fantecstasy
- "This was written in such smooth and charming meter. The imagery was fantastic. Narratives with dialogue are my favorite, and this was such a wonderful read. I got so much out of this. Things start with passion, then turn to commercial sellouts. " to blemish words with bindings." - connotations bastardize language. "
Posted by Kaleidoscope_Heart on "The Circus [Second Act - Culminant Du Vert]" by Fantecstasy
