Comments by All Members
- ""And heroine a hobby
Strapped to the tracks
With no train coming" Very very clever. Impeccable descriptions with multiple meanings. I always love this kind of subject matter as well. I feel like there is always something unseen we can learn from the pariah of society. Interesting that she ends up 'empty handed' because a miracle is too much to ask. And empty handed symbolic of alone - with the other man but not holding his hand not truly "WITH" those around her. I am so thoroughly impressed. The intricacy is admirable. You write some mighty powerful stuff!"
Posted by ALBATROSS on "Gutter Lily" by Narcissa
- "Wow, I do have to agree that last line is a knockout. You wield your creativity refined with precision. Love it."
Posted by ALBATROSS on "Paper White" by Narcissa
- "very alluring writing here, the syntax here makes you want to read this over again. Your descriptions of the actions in this poem were well done, you have a novel-esque flair to this. I really enjoyed it"
Posted by surething on "What's Left" by Narcissa
- "hell yes this gets my noodle goin like mac an cheese. Can I kiss your feet?"
Posted by Unknown on "Lady Rage" by Narcissa
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