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- "...'different words, same sentences': trying to speak in a sober tongue, but the old desires remain...this is the song of 1 not quite resolute in his intent to escape the destruction."
Posted by FadedBlues on "tearing down the destructionist" by past tense
- "'m.o.m.e.nt.s before her hands relieve me of my spine.' i've read a few of your works now, all this evening.. and i rarely read much outside my already years-old fave list these days.. you're truly astounding. so very pleased I was pointed your way. will read more. don't bank on me having much more to say of any insight, i'm afraid i've always sucked at commenting. but you are definitely astounding. mmmm. lovely."
Posted by Railway_Butterfly on "deus [ex] machina" by past tense
- "hoping its a done trying and just start doing. I often find myself saying trying when in fact I'm not really trying at all.. otherwise something would change or be done and it'd be noticed. 'scraping tally marks for the minutes'- like the particular section the most. "
Posted by OLd SouL on "tearing down the destructionist" by past tense
- "Very good - those of us that have struggled with addiction understand the horrifying reality of the emotion behind this piece. I look forward to reading more of your work - thanks for sharing."
Posted by Nehema on "tearing down the destructionist" by past tense
- "Reading this felt like sitting alone in your favorite bar after closing time, and hearing the perfect song coming on . . . loved the first stanza, and the repetition of it. A beautiful diagram of the thinking man's addiction. "
Posted by Carmina Gitana on "tearing down the destructionist" by past tense
- "that's one cold and crushing embrace. a group of gears loosely resembling a heart in an animated form. skillfulstylings. "
Posted by OLd SouL on "deus [ex] machina" by past tense
- "whoa.. this is some timely shit though I'm just now visiting. After reading your comment, I came to read something of yours and you managed to capture my feelings just last night. I kept waking up right before drifting and scribbling things down.. just needing it out of my head, with fingers crossed to sort it out. Though maybe I'm selfishly taking your words and making them pertain to me. Either way I wanted to share. "
Posted by OLd SouL on "pillow.case canvas" by past tense
- "wow i just loved this. i felt as though i was suspended breathlessly on every word. i love the way you write"
Posted by Vicious Pixie on "50%" by past tense
- "Powerful write, especially the ending. Superb work. +tpu+"
Posted by Unknown on "50%" by past tense
- "this reminded me of a story i saw about gutter punk children. heart breaking and lonely witht he bleakest glimmer of hope"
Posted by Sin on "50%" by past tense
- "I'd say a chill ran down 75% of my spine. This is obscenely brilliant and brutally honest. We decorate our lives to try and live them to the fullest; make everything more perfect and relevent because we feel we need a purpose. We're all perpetually doomed to be nothing more than measely humans. Perfect write. Thank you."
Posted by CjPsychotic on "50%" by past tense
- ""We are only as strong
as the weakest chain link
fence built around our wills to survive....I weep into the sewage grates
and hope that somewhere
my tears will find the ocean..." such powerful imagery.I'll be sure to read more of your work!"
Posted by Unknown on "50%" by past tense
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