Comments by All Members
- "goodness gracious,... totally submerged in this piece,... you know your taken by poetry when it reads itself to you,... and the last and most simple of lines at the demise.. "Can you dim the lights, please? Dim the lights"... i think i become a 'host voice' right there and then... captivating piece."
Posted by Unknown on "Dim the Lights" by unspeakable truth
- "I echo what the meg said... so many of my own personal images popped into my head as I read this... many of which from the past, too many from as recent as yesterday. The spot about smiles, good cheer, excitement in my tone, all under dead eyes... I saw, reflected, the devestation when one sees past the shell, and drowns in the deadness of the honesty only found in the eyes... MUCH too close to home, but somehow... yes, thank you for sharing this one"
Posted by Sketso on "Not Before" by unspeakable truth
- "this...was like staring into a mirror.honest and spoken with such poignant references that it felt like you must have slept inside my head before writing this."
Posted by Unknown on "Not Before" by unspeakable truth
- "silence can be golden...and such a relief too! "eventually leading one into the abysmal trenches
that only they could carve out with such precision" a brilliant smack on the nose, this is :) people can only play the blame game so long before they lose to their own BS..awesome write!"
Posted by Unknown on "Inciting Silence" by unspeakable truth
- "this kept building up like a maelstrom inside you, and the ending....a knife twist of truth to the stomach...as always your poetry is something to look forward to"
Posted by Unknown on "Suffocation" by unspeakable truth
- "I really felt the cold permeance of the narration in this one....you displaced yourself or someone and then let the thought process carry the emotions and enriched them in a fine layered poem...eloquently sombre and searching...brilliant"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "A Severed Speedball" by unspeakable truth
- "This reminds me of a book i used to love. Had it read to the point of memorization... the imagery it provides with the sense that time marches on, Ceven when everything eles is gone. Complete and unforgiving in it's truth."
Posted by Reefer_rave on "Sheered Minute" by unspeakable truth
- "It's remarkable this doesn't have more comments. This was an amazing piece of work. I will have to read more of your writes. =) "
Posted by Err0r on "A Simple Hello" by unspeakable truth
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