Comments by All Members
- "bloody hell!! This is a similiar notion to my 'Paranoia Is My Best Friend' poem which I've never posted...anywhere. I love this...exosphere/thermosphere.....yes yes....sound!!"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "a Vicious invective" by TheDismantled
- "Very powerful script. I felt as though thou-ouses preacher's emence voice multiplied and echoed through the taverns of an east indian noodle shop. I could almost see you speaking this in front of millions of pilgrams, as they listened intently."
Posted by DoctorAsh on "Kill the body and the head will die." by TheDismantled
- "unusual choice in the line breaks, not sure if you achieved a total desired effect, it wobbled a bit for me - not as convincing as it appeared for others. Still, it was a slant for difference cake, fair enough...."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "gag-reflex god disease." by TheDismantled
- "i second elisa..that title was perfection.. i think everyone can relate to this write, your frustration seethed from your words until that last line..it felt like the last sigh of breath leaving the lungs..eloquent indeed..welcome to DP ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "gag-reflex god disease." by TheDismantled
- "I had to read this a few times to capture the true meaning of the poem. What an excellent piece. Well done and welcome to DP. -Glass"
Posted by Unknown on "To each." by TheDismantled
- "i didnt get it at first...but i can see it now. lovely. the last stanza was really deep. good work!"
Posted by Grey Lies on "To each." by TheDismantled
- "Very butter-if-full. We are glad to have died, and we are pleased to be of the fallen. Powerful write my friend, tis about god-damned time you post shit- To dream is a worth to die for - To die is a worth to sympathize for. Excellent."
Posted by DoctorAsh on "To each." by TheDismantled
- "Exceedingly impressive. This carries a uniqueness I have not seen in awhile. Welcome to DP. ~b"
Posted by blue on "To each." by TheDismantled
