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a Vicious invective
By TheDismantled
noise!
noise!
this incessant rambling never ceases.
endlessly,
endlessly.
a rippling, snarling invective.
car alarms, dogs bark.
at dawn I close my eyes,
then the lawn mowers start.
due to this influence.
I rise in a weakened state.
.....................down....................
.....................down....................
.....................exosphere......................
...........thermo sphere............
.........mesosphere........
.....stratosphere.....
...troposphere...
through the layers of atmosphere
.........................I plummet...............................
Ow! I hit rock bottom bed rock, 12 step program drop-out.
after nights of insomnia,
life tends to be dull.
and all is written in.
sayings and accomplishments.....
I just wanna get some sleep.
-Mason Allison
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© 2007 TheDismantled
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On Tuesday, February 27, 2007, Sin
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wrote:
god i know this feeling...insomnia is the mother of all whores and ive slept with her many a night..the frustration pulsed and faded into resignation with the last sentence..im lovin your style ~kristy
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On Sunday, February 25, 2007, nur hidayah
(116) wrote:
this is amazing! the pounding words, the fall, the bitter end. unpleasant ride. great write.
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On Sunday, February 25, 2007, Sepulcrawl
(78) wrote:
you people make me want to kill myself
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On Sunday, February 25, 2007, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
wow this was wonderful.
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A former member wrote:
this was amazing! I could feel myself plummeting through the atmosphere with you
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On Sunday, February 25, 2007, DoctorAsh
(373) wrote:
I love your face. Thats why I wear scubba gear to bed, so the frosty fat ice cream cone kids and their cartoon languages stay on the outside of the glass .. splendid script my friend. good night.
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A former member wrote:
somebody needs to write an encyclopedia of your comments Daniel, with interpretations to boot...
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On Sunday, February 25, 2007, elisa
(1616) wrote:
the incessant 'noise' frays the very fabric of my psyche... well said.
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